for Past Lovers Don't Meet Again2/22/2014 c1 BlueRaccoonAnne
Wow this one shot is wonderfully written! I'm surprised this story hasn't been favorited by a bunch of people; keep on writing!
Wow this one shot is wonderfully written! I'm surprised this story hasn't been favorited by a bunch of people; keep on writing!
8/11/2013 c1 moonie forever
I really enjoyed this story. I liked the way you developed the characters and how well the flashbacks fit in with the plot. I think the storyline is really easy to connect with and you did a great job writing it. I know this story is a one-shot but I would have loved to know what happens next.
I really enjoyed this story. I liked the way you developed the characters and how well the flashbacks fit in with the plot. I think the storyline is really easy to connect with and you did a great job writing it. I know this story is a one-shot but I would have loved to know what happens next.
8/9/2013 c1 NotAfraidToFly
Hi! I really love your story. The structure is good. I like how you alternate between the present and then longer flashbacks, which really add depth to Erin's character. I don't know how big of a role Elizabeth gets to play but I like her character. She and Erin go well together. Andrew seems like a nice guy, and I'm excited to see how he and Erin have changed in the past... 5 years, was it? I'm new to the site and am in the middle of multiple writing projects on my own, so hopefully this review is helpful. :) I didn't see any big grammar things, those being the things I tend to see first. Keep up the writing!
Hi! I really love your story. The structure is good. I like how you alternate between the present and then longer flashbacks, which really add depth to Erin's character. I don't know how big of a role Elizabeth gets to play but I like her character. She and Erin go well together. Andrew seems like a nice guy, and I'm excited to see how he and Erin have changed in the past... 5 years, was it? I'm new to the site and am in the middle of multiple writing projects on my own, so hopefully this review is helpful. :) I didn't see any big grammar things, those being the things I tend to see first. Keep up the writing!