for Puppet6/25/2014 c1 emilystymest
ok, this actually creep me out (I got puppet and dolls phobia, and everytime you mention the smile I can't help but to think the puppet is like Billy in Dead Silence) but is this a one shot? I was hoping it is a longer story.
ok, this actually creep me out (I got puppet and dolls phobia, and everytime you mention the smile I can't help but to think the puppet is like Billy in Dead Silence) but is this a one shot? I was hoping it is a longer story.
6/14/2014 c1 
8Kaal
Wow. I truly enjoyed this piece. I feel so sad for the doll.
The way you write is really lovely because the words flow so well. I like how you fit in detail without rambling on.
There were some errors but they weren't that significant and can be easily spotted if you go through this again.
8KaalWow. I truly enjoyed this piece. I feel so sad for the doll.
The way you write is really lovely because the words flow so well. I like how you fit in detail without rambling on.
There were some errors but they weren't that significant and can be easily spotted if you go through this again.