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1JasmineRaven
I like this one better than Untitled 1. It felt really emotional. It kinda hit, maybe because I can relate to it. Once again, this poem flowed really well. I really really like this poem. Even though it makes me feel sad, it still love it! Keep up the brilliant writing! :)
P.S Sometimes people write best when they've had a bad day. :) Using your emotions to put this together really payed off.
1JasmineRavenI like this one better than Untitled 1. It felt really emotional. It kinda hit, maybe because I can relate to it. Once again, this poem flowed really well. I really really like this poem. Even though it makes me feel sad, it still love it! Keep up the brilliant writing! :)
P.S Sometimes people write best when they've had a bad day. :) Using your emotions to put this together really payed off.
1/3/2014 c1 JasmineRaven
I thought this poem flowed really well. It seemed to have a good beat to it. I liked the line, "This is mind released from its cage. This beast is enraged. My alter ego's been unleashed."
Well done!
I thought this poem flowed really well. It seemed to have a good beat to it. I liked the line, "This is mind released from its cage. This beast is enraged. My alter ego's been unleashed."
Well done!