4/7/2014 c9 1Beta Productions
You haven't really said much about Josh...so he is my least favorite and Tal is my favorite because he is so dam cool xD...I love Juliet also...she seems a badass girl...not like Tashabut similar
You haven't really said much about Josh...so he is my least favorite and Tal is my favorite because he is so dam cool xD...I love Juliet also...she seems a badass girl...not like Tashabut similar
11/11/2013 c9 1krikanalo
liked reginald in this chapter. probably he is the coolest. and tasha may be the most annoying, though that's just her character.
liked reginald in this chapter. probably he is the coolest. and tasha may be the most annoying, though that's just her character.
10/29/2013 c8 3TriSX
Nice chapter... I see that you potrayed Juliet as a mature little girl, well... we better wait for the h****rs.
Nice chapter... I see that you potrayed Juliet as a mature little girl, well... we better wait for the h****rs.
10/21/2013 c7 3TriSX
One word only... Awesome...
Now... when will Juliet appear...
Oh yeah! Keep up the good work.
One word only... Awesome...
Now... when will Juliet appear...
Oh yeah! Keep up the good work.
10/12/2013 c6 Terra Booma
I don't think I'm allowed to say my favorite, slightly biased.
But great chapter!
I don't think I'm allowed to say my favorite, slightly biased.
But great chapter!
10/12/2013 c6 3TriSX
I like Joshua.
1: I know you know the reasons.
2: becausevyou protrayed his character better.
Good job by the way
I like Joshua.
1: I know you know the reasons.
2: becausevyou protrayed his character better.
Good job by the way
10/4/2013 c1 6Silencerz123
This is soo cool! I like the Flyer reminded me of Hotel Translyvania or like something you would see on a billboard. Its ironic because i was making a character named Natasha too, but i tell you right now she is nothing like this, I never read that many ghost and paranormal stuff, but this is the best so far. looking forward to the rest
This is soo cool! I like the Flyer reminded me of Hotel Translyvania or like something you would see on a billboard. Its ironic because i was making a character named Natasha too, but i tell you right now she is nothing like this, I never read that many ghost and paranormal stuff, but this is the best so far. looking forward to the rest