
11/8/2013 c10 anni.mani
IT'S BEEN TOO LONG. I CAN'T. SERIOUSLY. PLEASE. YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND. I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR WEEKS. THIS NEEDS TO UPDATED LIKE NOW.
IT'S BEEN TOO LONG. I CAN'T. SERIOUSLY. PLEASE. YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND. I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR WEEKS. THIS NEEDS TO UPDATED LIKE NOW.
10/7/2013 c5
1KoriLee123
ahh drunk people, gotta love them, right? cant wait for more!(: you're doing great

ahh drunk people, gotta love them, right? cant wait for more!(: you're doing great
9/16/2013 c2 anni.mani
NOT EVEN FOUR CHAPTERS IN AND I ALREADY FEEL THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN MIKE AND CLARKE/ AVA!
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
NOT EVEN FOUR CHAPTERS IN AND I ALREADY FEEL THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN MIKE AND CLARKE/ AVA!
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
9/10/2013 c3
1vickifay
Well, Greta is proving to be quite the character. I didn't think there was going to be anything to her, after the first chapter, but I should've known better. Your characters are always great :) It'll be interesting to see Shane and Greta try and work their magic on eachother. They've both been through a lot, I can tell, and had their hearts broken a fair amount of times. Maybe the third time will be the charm? Especially since Greta isn't a musician. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Well, Greta is proving to be quite the character. I didn't think there was going to be anything to her, after the first chapter, but I should've known better. Your characters are always great :) It'll be interesting to see Shane and Greta try and work their magic on eachother. They've both been through a lot, I can tell, and had their hearts broken a fair amount of times. Maybe the third time will be the charm? Especially since Greta isn't a musician. Looking forward to the next chapter!
9/7/2013 c2
2chocoyum4
Ooooh D Mike and Clarke? ) I sure hope so haha and I'm hoping for Shane and Greta ) Ok, so I love Harrison and Greta's relationship ) It just makes me happy and I adore Harrison, I don't know why, I just do ) If you can't make up a suitable woman for him I volunteer as tribute! I so wish he was a real person haha Looking forward to chapter 3!
chocoyum4

Ooooh D Mike and Clarke? ) I sure hope so haha and I'm hoping for Shane and Greta ) Ok, so I love Harrison and Greta's relationship ) It just makes me happy and I adore Harrison, I don't know why, I just do ) If you can't make up a suitable woman for him I volunteer as tribute! I so wish he was a real person haha Looking forward to chapter 3!
chocoyum4
9/6/2013 c2
1vickifay
Okay, all dialogue chapters aren't /that/ bad. You learn stuff about the characters from it, I think. Like how in the world did Mike ever guess her first name? I have no idea at all. I haven't seen much of Bo yet, but he seems like bad news. Clarke just needs to kick him and his weirdo friends out. Forget Greta being all hospitable and making projects of every lost boy. At one point she just needs to lock the door to them. I am curious about Clarke's past, though. There's so much she's not telling us. Then again, it's only the second chapter...

Okay, all dialogue chapters aren't /that/ bad. You learn stuff about the characters from it, I think. Like how in the world did Mike ever guess her first name? I have no idea at all. I haven't seen much of Bo yet, but he seems like bad news. Clarke just needs to kick him and his weirdo friends out. Forget Greta being all hospitable and making projects of every lost boy. At one point she just needs to lock the door to them. I am curious about Clarke's past, though. There's so much she's not telling us. Then again, it's only the second chapter...
9/1/2013 c1
2chocoyum4
You seriously have no idea how excited I am about this chapter! ) I've been waiting for book three for what seems like ages, but hasn't really been that long ) Can't wait to see how this one works out! Your faithful reviewer
chocoyum4

You seriously have no idea how excited I am about this chapter! ) I've been waiting for book three for what seems like ages, but hasn't really been that long ) Can't wait to see how this one works out! Your faithful reviewer
chocoyum4
8/31/2013 c1
1vickifay
Yay, you're back! And so am I, after one hell of a crazy summer. I look forward to reading this as school starts :) I'd wondered at first why Greta/Garbo had such a weird name, but I guess it was a nickname. She seems like she could be nice enough. Clarke could be too, if she wasn't so overworked and living with idiots. Poor girl, it's obvious she's way too stressed. Maybe the newcomers will cheer her up. I'm excited to read things in Mike's POV, since we haven't gotten to hear much from him. Until next time, my friend!

Yay, you're back! And so am I, after one hell of a crazy summer. I look forward to reading this as school starts :) I'd wondered at first why Greta/Garbo had such a weird name, but I guess it was a nickname. She seems like she could be nice enough. Clarke could be too, if she wasn't so overworked and living with idiots. Poor girl, it's obvious she's way too stressed. Maybe the newcomers will cheer her up. I'm excited to read things in Mike's POV, since we haven't gotten to hear much from him. Until next time, my friend!
8/30/2013 c1 anni.mani
Wait are Garbo and Greta the same person or different people?...Kinda confused.
Excited to be reading a new DBS story though!
Wait are Garbo and Greta the same person or different people?...Kinda confused.
Excited to be reading a new DBS story though!
8/30/2013 c1 bookworm121197
I'm really excited about reading the third instalment. I loved both other parts and I can't wait to see what you have in store for Harrison, Mike and Shane. Greta is an interesting character also and I know I will grow to love her ways. Cannot wait until next chapter xxc
I'm really excited about reading the third instalment. I loved both other parts and I can't wait to see what you have in store for Harrison, Mike and Shane. Greta is an interesting character also and I know I will grow to love her ways. Cannot wait until next chapter xxc