for Katoptris9/17/2013 c1 Absent Pulse
The last three lines were super epic. I really am not very knowledgeable about poetry, but I liked the rhythm and scenario which played out as I read it. I think I know good poetry when I see one, and I thought this was great.
I dunno what else to say really, but you've left your mark on this velvety poem. It's so... you.
The last three lines were super epic. I really am not very knowledgeable about poetry, but I liked the rhythm and scenario which played out as I read it. I think I know good poetry when I see one, and I thought this was great.
I dunno what else to say really, but you've left your mark on this velvety poem. It's so... you.