for depression6/18/2014 c1 
97rust phoenix
very well expressed. the feeling is relatable and you convey the emotion powerfully and honestly. the last two lines are especially effective, as they show the difficulty of trying to escape something inside yourself.
97rust phoenixvery well expressed. the feeling is relatable and you convey the emotion powerfully and honestly. the last two lines are especially effective, as they show the difficulty of trying to escape something inside yourself.
9/4/2013 c1 16John-the-H-is-silent
Well, i for one find this poem very creative. Creativity holds beauty in itself. A good use of emotion and angst. I like it!
16John-the-H-is-silentWell, i for one find this poem very creative. Creativity holds beauty in itself. A good use of emotion and angst. I like it!