for Rose Red4/10/2014 c21 
2SouthernCasual
This was really great! I can't wait to read the last chapter! Really good job with story... I really appreciated how it wasn't solely focused on the romance, and you didn't make them fall in love on the fifth chapter. :) Can't wait to read more from you!
2SouthernCasualThis was really great! I can't wait to read the last chapter! Really good job with story... I really appreciated how it wasn't solely focused on the romance, and you didn't make them fall in love on the fifth chapter. :) Can't wait to read more from you!
4/10/2014 c1 SouthernCasual
I've been reading this all afternoon on my phone during class... Hahaha! I was immediately drawn in by the concept, and I can't stop reading! Great idea & great writing!
I've been reading this all afternoon on my phone during class... Hahaha! I was immediately drawn in by the concept, and I can't stop reading! Great idea & great writing!
4/10/2014 c21 smrae
Omg can't believe this story is almost over! Blows my mind. Well done chapter! Looking for to the final update :)
Omg can't believe this story is almost over! Blows my mind. Well done chapter! Looking for to the final update :)
3/29/2014 c20 xxSongBirdxx
Wow so Osric is also bought interesting... I hope Harrison is ok. until your next update have a nice day.
Wow so Osric is also bought interesting... I hope Harrison is ok. until your next update have a nice day.
3/23/2014 c19 Lily Mayflower
You just got yourself a new fan. The story is amazing. Interesting plot, well shaped characters, and gripping pace. If you ever decide to publish, count on me to buy and read it. The thing that frustrated me a tiny bit is that you don't describe more of the character's expressiong, gestures ... But I guess that would be only filler for a book ... Waiting for the next chapter ... and thank you, it was an amazing experience reading this !
You just got yourself a new fan. The story is amazing. Interesting plot, well shaped characters, and gripping pace. If you ever decide to publish, count on me to buy and read it. The thing that frustrated me a tiny bit is that you don't describe more of the character's expressiong, gestures ... But I guess that would be only filler for a book ... Waiting for the next chapter ... and thank you, it was an amazing experience reading this !
3/22/2014 c19 xxSongBirdxx
WOW does that mean she's free now ? that would be good but I hope Harrison is ok
WOW does that mean she's free now ? that would be good but I hope Harrison is ok
3/21/2014 c18 6Deeper than Fathomless
I know what you did there! You are mimicking nuclear energy! Once your break the uranium atom, it creates a ridiculous amount of energy! Ha-ha, you're very creative!
Good chapter!
6Deeper than FathomlessI know what you did there! You are mimicking nuclear energy! Once your break the uranium atom, it creates a ridiculous amount of energy! Ha-ha, you're very creative!
Good chapter!
3/21/2014 c17 Deeper than Fathomless
Tell 'em, gurl! Ha-ha, I get annoyed with immature writer who want more reviews than they truly deserve.
I did read this chapter...about three times, but I haven't reviewed yet because I have been too lazy to log into FF. Sorry, you won't get my immediate response. :/
I am glad she finally remembered what exactly happened, and it didn't even take any hypnotism. I'm still unsure how exactly she temporarily lost her memory. Good chapter!
Tell 'em, gurl! Ha-ha, I get annoyed with immature writer who want more reviews than they truly deserve.
I did read this chapter...about three times, but I haven't reviewed yet because I have been too lazy to log into FF. Sorry, you won't get my immediate response. :/
I am glad she finally remembered what exactly happened, and it didn't even take any hypnotism. I'm still unsure how exactly she temporarily lost her memory. Good chapter!
3/8/2014 c17 alex
I love your writing! If it came in a book form I would buy it! :p
I love your writing! If it came in a book form I would buy it! :p
3/7/2014 c17 J
I love this story, it's unique and intriguing. It's a great balance of a mystery and a love story and I find myself eagerly awaiting more and hoping it will be a happy ending!
I love this story, it's unique and intriguing. It's a great balance of a mystery and a love story and I find myself eagerly awaiting more and hoping it will be a happy ending!
3/7/2014 c17 2Luti Faube
I always look forward to your updates and enjoy every one of them. I wasn't disappointed by this one, you're a great author. I love how intricate the story seems, with the past linking to the present and all these unknown plans. I just have little patience for these plans to be unveiled, but I am impressed by your regular updates.
And about sloppy writing, I agree. It's annoying when someone is desperate for popularity and not to improve. They barely have grammar skills. On fanfiction, I used to see people reviewing their own stories. When I called them on it, it was pathetic: they got their friends to PM me, and told me excuses on how it wasn't them, and one sent my story a negative review calling me a b*tch. Don't review them. Or just review saying the truth. Ugh. Sigh. Update soon!
2Luti FaubeI always look forward to your updates and enjoy every one of them. I wasn't disappointed by this one, you're a great author. I love how intricate the story seems, with the past linking to the present and all these unknown plans. I just have little patience for these plans to be unveiled, but I am impressed by your regular updates.
And about sloppy writing, I agree. It's annoying when someone is desperate for popularity and not to improve. They barely have grammar skills. On fanfiction, I used to see people reviewing their own stories. When I called them on it, it was pathetic: they got their friends to PM me, and told me excuses on how it wasn't them, and one sent my story a negative review calling me a b*tch. Don't review them. Or just review saying the truth. Ugh. Sigh. Update soon!