for The Dazzler10/30/2013 c1 
7Cecelia Hawk
I like this piece, because it is so relateable, especially the lines 'I will wonder about what he's thinking/If he sees me as a forever-child or a member of the grown up clan/and which scenario scares me the most'. I can also relate to the line 'maybe I'm just hyperaware/and have this strange need to eroticize everything', since I'm a daydreamer.
'College grad lips' seems a little clumsy, as I don't know what you mean by this phrase, but I have no other criticisms at this moment.
7Cecelia HawkI like this piece, because it is so relateable, especially the lines 'I will wonder about what he's thinking/If he sees me as a forever-child or a member of the grown up clan/and which scenario scares me the most'. I can also relate to the line 'maybe I'm just hyperaware/and have this strange need to eroticize everything', since I'm a daydreamer.
'College grad lips' seems a little clumsy, as I don't know what you mean by this phrase, but I have no other criticisms at this moment.