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10/30/2013 c1 7Cecelia Hawk
I like this piece, because it is so relateable, especially the lines 'I will wonder about what he's thinking/If he sees me as a forever-child or a member of the grown up clan/and which scenario scares me the most'. I can also relate to the line 'maybe I'm just hyperaware/and have this strange need to eroticize everything', since I'm a daydreamer.

'College grad lips' seems a little clumsy, as I don't know what you mean by this phrase, but I have no other criticisms at this moment.
9/11/2013 c1 236mezzie
gah. I missed the way you put things. what an etching. it felt like the panel-to-panel progression of a great graphic novel, showing just the angle and intuition that the artist wants you to see.

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