for Nothing9/4/2006 c1 
5Ash of Lynne
I know what you're trying to say, but that wasn't it. Your stanzas don't match, so I'd make it all into one stanza. Also, when you do that, take the periods and replace them with commas, it will flow much better. I really enjoyed it!
5Ash of LynneI know what you're trying to say, but that wasn't it. Your stanzas don't match, so I'd make it all into one stanza. Also, when you do that, take the periods and replace them with commas, it will flow much better. I really enjoyed it!
6/2/2006 c1 Kardos
Nice poem! I can see how Escaflowne could have inspired this poem. It sort of reminded me of the relationship between Jajuka and Celena. You know, the part where Celena is taken away and Jajuka is powerless to help her. I liked the emotions you've put into this poem. :)
Nice poem! I can see how Escaflowne could have inspired this poem. It sort of reminded me of the relationship between Jajuka and Celena. You know, the part where Celena is taken away and Jajuka is powerless to help her. I liked the emotions you've put into this poem. :)
2/22/2002 c1 Yubiwa
Why cant you ever write anything that sucks? WHY?
Why cant you ever write anything that sucks? WHY?
6/27/2001 c1 5hupsoonheng
*wak* ::goes and hides under couch pillows:: ::is eepified:: From looking at you, you wouldn't think you write this kinda stuff... ::sniff:: so sad... But then again, who am I to talk? ^^0 Eheheheh...
5hupsoonheng*wak* ::goes and hides under couch pillows:: ::is eepified:: From looking at you, you wouldn't think you write this kinda stuff... ::sniff:: so sad... But then again, who am I to talk? ^^0 Eheheheh...
6/13/2001 c1 21SunMoonAndSpoon
...I am supposed to be a writer, yet I have no words to describe the greatness of that poem.
21SunMoonAndSpoon...I am supposed to be a writer, yet I have no words to describe the greatness of that poem.