for Gentlemen3/13/2017 c1 
1rAiNwAtEr1
This was such a beautiful one-shot. Their need was palpable, and explosive; leaving me awed and hot under the collar. Thank you ever so much for this. I would love to read a multi chapter story from you.
1rAiNwAtEr1This was such a beautiful one-shot. Their need was palpable, and explosive; leaving me awed and hot under the collar. Thank you ever so much for this. I would love to read a multi chapter story from you.
8/3/2016 c1 1Cheddar-Graham
That was a great piece of writing. At the beginning I could see the UST it was so palpable and then I almost fell off my seat going, Will they, won't they... When the moment came, it was tasteful but DEFINITE, no coy suggestions of what he did to the narrator, unlike me who, well, isn't always so direct. And I also liked that the emotional was balanced with the physical, so this wasn't smut but it also wasn't melodramatic without substance.
1Cheddar-GrahamThat was a great piece of writing. At the beginning I could see the UST it was so palpable and then I almost fell off my seat going, Will they, won't they... When the moment came, it was tasteful but DEFINITE, no coy suggestions of what he did to the narrator, unlike me who, well, isn't always so direct. And I also liked that the emotional was balanced with the physical, so this wasn't smut but it also wasn't melodramatic without substance.
9/10/2015 c1 Tetsuya Akira
That was hot your super good at this I wish I could have read this as soon as it was done thanks for an awsome one shot :-) :-D loved it you could also continue this story (just a thougjt I think it would be popular)
That was hot your super good at this I wish I could have read this as soon as it was done thanks for an awsome one shot :-) :-D loved it you could also continue this story (just a thougjt I think it would be popular)
7/3/2015 c1 xPencilsCamerasx
I think their names are James (the best friend) and... Nicolas. Nicholas? No, Nicolas.
Very artfully written.
I think their names are James (the best friend) and... Nicolas. Nicholas? No, Nicolas.
Very artfully written.
2/24/2015 c1 Guest
Wow. I can't believe this is the best thing I've ever read. But in all honesty, it's the best story I've ever read. Can't believe that someone of this earth wrote this gorgeous love story.
Wow. I can't believe this is the best thing I've ever read. But in all honesty, it's the best story I've ever read. Can't believe that someone of this earth wrote this gorgeous love story.
12/31/2014 c1 Cloey van Zyl
Aahh! I loved this so much! Really wonderful! As for names... Gah! I don't know! I'll have to think about it so for now they are just namesless- but beautiful- characters.
Aahh! I loved this so much! Really wonderful! As for names... Gah! I don't know! I'll have to think about it so for now they are just namesless- but beautiful- characters.
6/19/2014 c1 myst77
Wow. If only I could map my heartbeats, plot all the highs in a graph, solve all the extreme tender emotions you have managed to arise through this intense story of yours, I would. This was truly a beautiful read, in every sense of the word.
Write more, love more, grow more... I wish you all the best! You have made my day. Thank you.
Wow. If only I could map my heartbeats, plot all the highs in a graph, solve all the extreme tender emotions you have managed to arise through this intense story of yours, I would. This was truly a beautiful read, in every sense of the word.
Write more, love more, grow more... I wish you all the best! You have made my day. Thank you.
4/8/2014 c1 Guest
That was a wonderful love story :)
That was a wonderful love story :)
3/2/2014 c1 Guest
"I need you to steal my innocence" was my favorite! Beautiful story :) I want more...
"I need you to steal my innocence" was my favorite! Beautiful story :) I want more...
1/31/2014 c1 Guest
Hello! You are a lovely writer, I just wanted to point out that they had pens, not quills, by 1878. Sorry, it's stupid, but there it is.
Hello! You are a lovely writer, I just wanted to point out that they had pens, not quills, by 1878. Sorry, it's stupid, but there it is.
1/29/2014 c1 Kat Desi
Deeply moving. I didn't expect this to be a bit intense. Thanks. I enjoyed it. x
Deeply moving. I didn't expect this to be a bit intense. Thanks. I enjoyed it. x
1/3/2014 c1 Guest
Wow, this was beautifully written :) I love that you incorporated appropriate language for the time period, and how timid and passionate it all is. I feel like these characters are actually MAKING LOVE, which is an impressive feat on Fictionpress :)
Wow, this was beautifully written :) I love that you incorporated appropriate language for the time period, and how timid and passionate it all is. I feel like these characters are actually MAKING LOVE, which is an impressive feat on Fictionpress :)