
9/16/2014 c1
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This is really great; it rhyme worked really well and I think when something flows so nicely it makes it easy to read and the meaning of the poem come through more. I really liked the topic of it as well, it captured that nice feeling when night is leaving and day is finally coming.

This is really great; it rhyme worked really well and I think when something flows so nicely it makes it easy to read and the meaning of the poem come through more. I really liked the topic of it as well, it captured that nice feeling when night is leaving and day is finally coming.