for Starstruck1/22/2014 c2 
18Sapphy-Sweets
Wow, that was a great one-shot. I have to say I am genuinely impressed by your execution of romance, unlike the other poorly written stories I had accepted as the general collection of all romance stories. This, as well as other stories you have authored, leaves me glued to the text and craving more. This descriptive writing is beautiful, the love soft and sweet, and inducing my curiousity as to the backstories of these characters. (I might just read that story by that friend of yours).
The only thing that made me cringe was the last line. I highly recommend you revise it. It sounds... uhm well very corny and generic, and I really don't mean that in an fecetious way, I just admire this story and find it a weak ending that doesn't really give it proper justice.
Look forward to my reviews,
-Sapphire
18Sapphy-SweetsWow, that was a great one-shot. I have to say I am genuinely impressed by your execution of romance, unlike the other poorly written stories I had accepted as the general collection of all romance stories. This, as well as other stories you have authored, leaves me glued to the text and craving more. This descriptive writing is beautiful, the love soft and sweet, and inducing my curiousity as to the backstories of these characters. (I might just read that story by that friend of yours).
The only thing that made me cringe was the last line. I highly recommend you revise it. It sounds... uhm well very corny and generic, and I really don't mean that in an fecetious way, I just admire this story and find it a weak ending that doesn't really give it proper justice.
Look forward to my reviews,
-Sapphire
12/18/2013 c2 9Nagwam
Wow. This is a powerful piece of writing. I regret that I wasn't able to finish reading the original story by Irony'sFriend, although I was enjoying it before it was taken down. Even though I never finished it (much to my chagrin), I can already tell that this sequel is completely faithful to the original story and characters, and indeed I could easily believe that Irony'sFriend wrote this. Very well done :)
9NagwamWow. This is a powerful piece of writing. I regret that I wasn't able to finish reading the original story by Irony'sFriend, although I was enjoying it before it was taken down. Even though I never finished it (much to my chagrin), I can already tell that this sequel is completely faithful to the original story and characters, and indeed I could easily believe that Irony'sFriend wrote this. Very well done :)
10/23/2013 c2 Elusive Lucidity
This was incredible! It is truly a difficult job to recreate someone's characters and present them in such a refreshing light, all while keeping them true to themselves. And you've done a great job! :)
I have always wanted something hugely romantic between Emeary and Daniel and even though Irony'sFriend has done a great job of developing something insanely sweet between them, this passionate take on their romance was well written! :)
This was incredible! It is truly a difficult job to recreate someone's characters and present them in such a refreshing light, all while keeping them true to themselves. And you've done a great job! :)
I have always wanted something hugely romantic between Emeary and Daniel and even though Irony'sFriend has done a great job of developing something insanely sweet between them, this passionate take on their romance was well written! :)
9/30/2013 c2 9MagicWords
I loved your take on Irony'sFriend's story! Seeing all the characters in this new, different light was just beautiful. You portrayed them all so well, and I loved reading this alternate ending!
I simply loved the bedroom scene, how it began with reminiscence and ended in a sort of full circle, but now, those words carry a different meaning. It was quite lovely, and I'm so glad you finally posted this! :)
9MagicWordsI loved your take on Irony'sFriend's story! Seeing all the characters in this new, different light was just beautiful. You portrayed them all so well, and I loved reading this alternate ending!
I simply loved the bedroom scene, how it began with reminiscence and ended in a sort of full circle, but now, those words carry a different meaning. It was quite lovely, and I'm so glad you finally posted this! :)
9/30/2013 c2 2Irony'sFriend
It. Is. Perfect! Oh my gosh I am seriously fangirling so hard right now, I can't even. Thank you so much for doing this! I can't tell you how much it means to me!
It was so surreal to read my characters in a way I never imagined them, but it was beautiful. I love that Aaron gave Em away. Very appropriate! And the blue roses and the symbolism with the moon. It was all way cool!
To be honest with you, I was nearly in tears when I opened the link and started reading. I'm still in shock, and I'll have to leave a better review later when I'm not an emotional mess.
Once again, thank you so much!
2Irony'sFriendIt. Is. Perfect! Oh my gosh I am seriously fangirling so hard right now, I can't even. Thank you so much for doing this! I can't tell you how much it means to me!
It was so surreal to read my characters in a way I never imagined them, but it was beautiful. I love that Aaron gave Em away. Very appropriate! And the blue roses and the symbolism with the moon. It was all way cool!
To be honest with you, I was nearly in tears when I opened the link and started reading. I'm still in shock, and I'll have to leave a better review later when I'm not an emotional mess.
Once again, thank you so much!