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10/14/2013 c2 4adalyn
Uh, Carson's so mean! I hate him.
10/2/2013 c1 1EmilieSkellington
I really liked it but...
You started out on third person... And around the middle it turned into first person...

Try to make the whole transition into the other differently...

Other than that I loved it! Update soon!
10/2/2013 c1 emma5678
This is amazing for a first chapter!

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