for Left Behind6/22/2014 c9 Erica Ne
What about Austin?
What about Austin?
6/22/2014 c9 Faylinn Notchwood
I still kinda think Jake's a jerk. That and he needs to seriously work on his social skills if what he did to Karly at school "wasn't" supposed to hurt her. My vote's for Austin so far. I think Karly should say no to Jake's idea. You make it easy to understand the characters which is great. I can't wait for the next chapter!
I still kinda think Jake's a jerk. That and he needs to seriously work on his social skills if what he did to Karly at school "wasn't" supposed to hurt her. My vote's for Austin so far. I think Karly should say no to Jake's idea. You make it easy to understand the characters which is great. I can't wait for the next chapter!
6/22/2014 c9 Lady Morrighan
I like Jake and I like the idea of him paired with Karly, but I dislike how Jake's emotions for her are half hearted, I mean if he trully loved her he would let go of Steph. Can't wait to see more chapters.
I like Jake and I like the idea of him paired with Karly, but I dislike how Jake's emotions for her are half hearted, I mean if he trully loved her he would let go of Steph. Can't wait to see more chapters.
6/22/2014 c9 Guest
Jake is fucking annoying & disgusting.
Austin is adorable!
Jake/karly nooooooo!
I beg you!
Jake is fucking bipolar!
If she ends up with him worst story ever
Jake needs to grow the fuck up & karly deserves better
Jake is fucking annoying & disgusting.
Austin is adorable!
Jake/karly nooooooo!
I beg you!
Jake is fucking bipolar!
If she ends up with him worst story ever
Jake needs to grow the fuck up & karly deserves better
6/22/2014 c9 Tiandra
I am so cheesed...is he rude...bout I'll date both if you at the same time! NOOO you pick one. I don't even believe that he really really like karly but I do...becasue he was drunk...UGHHHH THEIR LIFE IS SO CONFUSING WHY CAN'T he just date karly!...I know that's who he wants..I hope.
I am so cheesed...is he rude...bout I'll date both if you at the same time! NOOO you pick one. I don't even believe that he really really like karly but I do...becasue he was drunk...UGHHHH THEIR LIFE IS SO CONFUSING WHY CAN'T he just date karly!...I know that's who he wants..I hope.
6/22/2014 c9 
3TheClosetWriter16
No not cool. If she accepts Jake's stupid proposal... well I won't be happy. She's not just some stupid pet that he can play with and force to compete with Stephanie for his affections.
Amazing chapter :)
3TheClosetWriter16No not cool. If she accepts Jake's stupid proposal... well I won't be happy. She's not just some stupid pet that he can play with and force to compete with Stephanie for his affections.
Amazing chapter :)
6/21/2014 c9 Booklover5624
Okay so please tell me Karly does not fall for Jakes stupidity . Like really !? How about he dates them both at the same time ?! Ugh he angers me .please update soon I need to know what happens
Okay so please tell me Karly does not fall for Jakes stupidity . Like really !? How about he dates them both at the same time ?! Ugh he angers me .please update soon I need to know what happens
6/21/2014 c9 1Ariel'sCove
"how about I date both of you at the same time?"
how bout no I don't want yo nasty whores gonorrhea.
just an idea for her response XD
seriously though, LOVE the story so far.
but Karly needs to grow a pair of balls.
1Ariel'sCove"how about I date both of you at the same time?"
how bout no I don't want yo nasty whores gonorrhea.
just an idea for her response XD
seriously though, LOVE the story so far.
but Karly needs to grow a pair of balls.
6/21/2014 c9 3TaylorTheWriter
O...M...G! They kissed! But...he wants to be a cheater? Hmm...don't know how I feel about him right now. Great chapter, please update soon! .
3TaylorTheWriterO...M...G! They kissed! But...he wants to be a cheater? Hmm...don't know how I feel about him right now. Great chapter, please update soon! .
6/21/2014 c9 story
Oh boy! she'd better say no, my god how egotistical can one immature boy be! If she has any self respect she'll tell him to take a long walk of a short pier.
Oh boy! she'd better say no, my god how egotistical can one immature boy be! If she has any self respect she'll tell him to take a long walk of a short pier.
6/21/2014 c9 pastelcolors
That jerk! I forgot how I felt about Jake, but I dislike him a bit now.
Their interaction was really sweet, but, the next day, he's just UGH!
Lots of mixed feelings about him.
I'm sorry if I'm sounding judgmental! But, of course, I don't have to like every character, heh. x')
Austin, on the other hand, I like a lot. He's a cutie, but there's a backstory, isn't there? :(
Was so looking forward to this chapter, and it was really, really satisfying! Really hoping that Karly will say no out of common sense, but saying yes would make the story really interesting. :O
I'M SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS, WOO! Weekly updates; that's heavenly. ;_;
I'll try to review every update, and find something to say because I really enjoy this story. :D
That jerk! I forgot how I felt about Jake, but I dislike him a bit now.
Their interaction was really sweet, but, the next day, he's just UGH!
Lots of mixed feelings about him.
I'm sorry if I'm sounding judgmental! But, of course, I don't have to like every character, heh. x')
Austin, on the other hand, I like a lot. He's a cutie, but there's a backstory, isn't there? :(
Was so looking forward to this chapter, and it was really, really satisfying! Really hoping that Karly will say no out of common sense, but saying yes would make the story really interesting. :O
I'M SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS, WOO! Weekly updates; that's heavenly. ;_;
I'll try to review every update, and find something to say because I really enjoy this story. :D
6/9/2014 c8 Guest
Wow , this chapter made me cry so much
Wow , this chapter made me cry so much
6/7/2014 c8 Erica Ne
Are you still writtin?! I love this story, hate fir it to end this way. Please write more!
Are you still writtin?! I love this story, hate fir it to end this way. Please write more!
5/22/2014 c7 Faylinn Notchwood
Jake is probably world's biggest jerk. And his girlfriend doesn't seem to be very secure if she won't even listen to Karly's telling her nothing's going on. Austin. Now he's a pretty great guy so far. It'll be interesting to see what happens with him. I wonder what's going to happen now...
Jake is probably world's biggest jerk. And his girlfriend doesn't seem to be very secure if she won't even listen to Karly's telling her nothing's going on. Austin. Now he's a pretty great guy so far. It'll be interesting to see what happens with him. I wonder what's going to happen now...