for Left Behind10/6/2013 c1 VolleyGirl
This was a good chapter but jake is kinda weird but cute at the same time I can't wait to see what happens between them !something is definitely there I can feel it
This was a good chapter but jake is kinda weird but cute at the same time I can't wait to see what happens between them !something is definitely there I can feel it
10/4/2013 c1 
69Shadowswept
I hope you keep writing this. I really like it so far. The situation is interesting, and you've already set up the attraction between them. In some stories you have to wait forever for things to start happening, but yours gets going immediately.
69ShadowsweptI hope you keep writing this. I really like it so far. The situation is interesting, and you've already set up the attraction between them. In some stories you have to wait forever for things to start happening, but yours gets going immediately.
10/4/2013 c1 Faylinn Notchwood
Hey. This seems like it could really go somewhere. Don't give up on it! You're doing great!
Hey. This seems like it could really go somewhere. Don't give up on it! You're doing great!