for A Poem for My Thesis2/1/2014 c1 
1k+Faithless Juliet
I really like how lyrical this fact based slice of life poem is. At first I thought you were just utilizing comedic poetry but by the end I was pretty sure that the subject of the poem was in fact about becoming a doctor, rather than dissecting an actual dissertation and using metaphor to get the point across.
The only verse that I thought was out of place was: "all my bodies die..." IDK it just felt too morbid in the context of the rest of the poem, and rather than feeling like a metaphor it felt too real and switched up the vibe of the rest of the piece.
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietI really like how lyrical this fact based slice of life poem is. At first I thought you were just utilizing comedic poetry but by the end I was pretty sure that the subject of the poem was in fact about becoming a doctor, rather than dissecting an actual dissertation and using metaphor to get the point across.
The only verse that I thought was out of place was: "all my bodies die..." IDK it just felt too morbid in the context of the rest of the poem, and rather than feeling like a metaphor it felt too real and switched up the vibe of the rest of the piece.
Juliet.