
6/7/2014 c3 rahbeam
URGH perfect as always. I've re-read it everyday since you updated and keep falling deeper and deeper into love with it. both FRUSTRATING (why am I not this talented?!) and completely mesmerising how well you write.
URGH perfect as always. I've re-read it everyday since you updated and keep falling deeper and deeper into love with it. both FRUSTRATING (why am I not this talented?!) and completely mesmerising how well you write.
6/6/2014 c3 LondonLi
I'm so glad you updated this! I love how Mack realized how much life had changed, and pretty much all on his own!;) Thanks again for the new posts lately. I've really been enjoying your stories.
I'm so glad you updated this! I love how Mack realized how much life had changed, and pretty much all on his own!;) Thanks again for the new posts lately. I've really been enjoying your stories.
6/4/2014 c3
75AlysonSerenaStone
And speaking of "Brown Eyes"...When are you going to update that one? I enjoyed the happy ending of this. I love the good old happy endings; nothing wrong with them! Great work and happy to see that you are back to updating!

And speaking of "Brown Eyes"...When are you going to update that one? I enjoyed the happy ending of this. I love the good old happy endings; nothing wrong with them! Great work and happy to see that you are back to updating!
6/4/2014 c3 MirrorofSouls
As much as those sweet/sad endings really hit home, happy endings still are better, with those warm fuzzy feelings they bring. Brilliant work and glad you updated :D (naturally.)
As much as those sweet/sad endings really hit home, happy endings still are better, with those warm fuzzy feelings they bring. Brilliant work and glad you updated :D (naturally.)
6/4/2014 c3 ess3sandra
awsome! great that they ended up together! looking forward to read your new stories!
awsome! great that they ended up together! looking forward to read your new stories!
6/3/2014 c3
6cityflux
:') As exciting as I find sad/bittersweet endings, I'm a sucker for happily ever afters. Please update TBB and The Classics of Love soon!

:') As exciting as I find sad/bittersweet endings, I'm a sucker for happily ever afters. Please update TBB and The Classics of Love soon!
5/7/2014 c2 Littlechin
This short story is absolutely amazing, it got me through finals week. Please update! I'm completely torn between wanting the main characters to end up together and wanting Alana to be strong and happy with the new man. Overall your writing conveys such emotion and puts me through a whirlwind.
This short story is absolutely amazing, it got me through finals week. Please update! I'm completely torn between wanting the main characters to end up together and wanting Alana to be strong and happy with the new man. Overall your writing conveys such emotion and puts me through a whirlwind.
5/2/2014 c2 Guest
Please update this story soon. :) I absolutely love this fic. - Dee
Please update this story soon. :) I absolutely love this fic. - Dee
3/30/2014 c2 Guest
I really liked this story, and I hope that you update soon :) Cant wait!
I really liked this story, and I hope that you update soon :) Cant wait!
3/16/2014 c2 Guest
This is kind of beautiful in a sad way... okay, not "kind of", but beautiful. I cant wait to read the next one and I hope it comes out soon. It is really good, I love it.
This is kind of beautiful in a sad way... okay, not "kind of", but beautiful. I cant wait to read the next one and I hope it comes out soon. It is really good, I love it.
2/26/2014 c2 amessageinabottle
thank God there is going to be another chapter :)
I can't wait! I'm rooting for Alana and I guess from the way you are writing you are leaning in that direction but you never really know with these stories...
thank God there is going to be another chapter :)
I can't wait! I'm rooting for Alana and I guess from the way you are writing you are leaning in that direction but you never really know with these stories...
1/31/2014 c2 ess3sandra
Re read chapter 2
I really hope he chooses alana! Its my middle name, have to vote for a namesake as well as the underdog!
Re read chapter 2
I really hope he chooses alana! Its my middle name, have to vote for a namesake as well as the underdog!
1/3/2014 c2 SRS
Please update! I beg of you. The suspense is leaving me in agony.
Please update! I beg of you. The suspense is leaving me in agony.