for Second Chances10/14/2013 c1 dee
whose secnd chances? kennedy or alana? nice job, now you make me visit your profile everyday for knowing you already updating or not.
your bio is one of my bookmark. :)
what is my favorite thing? my family, chocolate and watching korean drama. but now I'm getting fatter and if I eat too much chocolate, ugly pimples will pop up to my face. a lot of ugly pimples and it's not cute. at all.
whose secnd chances? kennedy or alana? nice job, now you make me visit your profile everyday for knowing you already updating or not.
your bio is one of my bookmark. :)
what is my favorite thing? my family, chocolate and watching korean drama. but now I'm getting fatter and if I eat too much chocolate, ugly pimples will pop up to my face. a lot of ugly pimples and it's not cute. at all.
10/14/2013 c1 
16White Rose Blossom
Loved it! Always great to see new things from you. Can't wait to see where it's going...I have my ideas but Alana's presence threw a twist in my original thoughts anyway. Looking forward to part 2!
16White Rose BlossomLoved it! Always great to see new things from you. Can't wait to see where it's going...I have my ideas but Alana's presence threw a twist in my original thoughts anyway. Looking forward to part 2!
10/14/2013 c1 K
You're back! So freaking happy! You will always be one of my favorite writers in FP, and it's an absolute joy to see an update from you. 3
P.S: I miss The Classics of Love! (No pressure, love) :p
You're back! So freaking happy! You will always be one of my favorite writers in FP, and it's an absolute joy to see an update from you. 3
P.S: I miss The Classics of Love! (No pressure, love) :p
10/14/2013 c1 dee
Please, please post no. 2 soon.
I'm hooked. Lol
Loved it!
Please, please post no. 2 soon.
I'm hooked. Lol
Loved it!
10/13/2013 c1 1DuchessYappingDog
I can't wait until part 2! Oh I wonder if he is final realizing what he's had all along. Stop pining for the past and see the present. Or I guess now it's the recent past.
I hope more drama happens before they're together again! Love reading it in stories... But hate drama in real life.
1DuchessYappingDogI can't wait until part 2! Oh I wonder if he is final realizing what he's had all along. Stop pining for the past and see the present. Or I guess now it's the recent past.
I hope more drama happens before they're together again! Love reading it in stories... But hate drama in real life.
10/13/2013 c1 Canada 1
Love it. I wish you had plans for something longer.
Is the epilogue for Brown Eyes still in the works?
Love it. I wish you had plans for something longer.
Is the epilogue for Brown Eyes still in the works?
10/13/2013 c1 castiel89
Oh good lord. You left us there?! You have me torn. I really want him to find happiness with Kennedy, because from the way people talk about them together, they were definitely right for each other, age difference be damned.
And the you have Alana and my heart hurts for her and thinks, geeze. Maybe these two that have been burned in their last relationship in some way, are the TRUE right ones for each other. And if he could get really have that closure from Kennedy, he'd realize how much he and Alana have moved into each other's lives.
I love you and I hate you at the same time for all these feels.
Xoxo
Amy
Oh good lord. You left us there?! You have me torn. I really want him to find happiness with Kennedy, because from the way people talk about them together, they were definitely right for each other, age difference be damned.
And the you have Alana and my heart hurts for her and thinks, geeze. Maybe these two that have been burned in their last relationship in some way, are the TRUE right ones for each other. And if he could get really have that closure from Kennedy, he'd realize how much he and Alana have moved into each other's lives.
I love you and I hate you at the same time for all these feels.
Xoxo
Amy
10/13/2013 c1 Colleen
Not bothered to login in, so this is the most convenient thing to do.
I really like this. Usually I don't feel that attached to characters that are introduced later on - i.e. Alana - but I actually really like her here. So that's great!
Ummm, my favorite thing in the world? Excluding people, I think the stars. Because they're a sign of infinity and hope and dreams. To quote Oscar Wilde: "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Hope that helps somehow! :)
Not bothered to login in, so this is the most convenient thing to do.
I really like this. Usually I don't feel that attached to characters that are introduced later on - i.e. Alana - but I actually really like her here. So that's great!
Ummm, my favorite thing in the world? Excluding people, I think the stars. Because they're a sign of infinity and hope and dreams. To quote Oscar Wilde: "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Hope that helps somehow! :)
10/13/2013 c1 ess3sandra
Alana should tell Mack what she is actually feeling! Is she pregnant or sick in cancer?
Alana should tell Mack what she is actually feeling! Is she pregnant or sick in cancer?
10/13/2013 c1 Damned to heaven
Whenever I read a book the first female character introduced is the one I usually like and side with because authors usually introduce those main characters right at the beginning. In this story, I like Alana more than Kennedy, I mean not because we had Alana's, Kennedy sounded great but Alana, well she just reeks of strong feisty female.
Whenever I read a book the first female character introduced is the one I usually like and side with because authors usually introduce those main characters right at the beginning. In this story, I like Alana more than Kennedy, I mean not because we had Alana's, Kennedy sounded great but Alana, well she just reeks of strong feisty female.
10/13/2013 c1 7gulistala
Oh yay! Can't wait to read part 1. It's good to read from you again.
My most favourite thing? Going to the seaside, breathing in the salty air and listening to the waves softly crash against the shoreline. D
7gulistalaOh yay! Can't wait to read part 1. It's good to read from you again.
My most favourite thing? Going to the seaside, breathing in the salty air and listening to the waves softly crash against the shoreline. D
10/12/2013 c1 Guest
This is sooooo good. I really love Alana. I can't wait for the second part.
This is sooooo good. I really love Alana. I can't wait for the second part.
10/12/2013 c1 1cerulean-azure
Favourite thing in the word... finishing a good story and feeling at peace with the world. Especially if I've had a bad day, or had my emotions thrown out of whack.
I loved part one, and I'm glad you somehow made it back to the shores of fictionpress :)
1cerulean-azureFavourite thing in the word... finishing a good story and feeling at peace with the world. Especially if I've had a bad day, or had my emotions thrown out of whack.
I loved part one, and I'm glad you somehow made it back to the shores of fictionpress :)
10/12/2013 c1 LondonLi
I love your long one-shots! And I hope to read more of this great snippet. You are so good at creating characters and worlds that totally suck me in. And right now, one of my most favorite things in the world are Starbucks Pumpkin Spice Latte's. Totally comforting and something I look forward to every autumn.
I love your long one-shots! And I hope to read more of this great snippet. You are so good at creating characters and worlds that totally suck me in. And right now, one of my most favorite things in the world are Starbucks Pumpkin Spice Latte's. Totally comforting and something I look forward to every autumn.