for Almost Dying6/24/2017 c57 Anon
I so miss this story, well I am waiting every day for the 4th book. Almost human. I hope you get ideas to start working on it soon.
I love Kieron and terry, srsly.
I so miss this story, well I am waiting every day for the 4th book. Almost human. I hope you get ideas to start working on it soon.
I love Kieron and terry, srsly.
6/5/2017 c56 Liryca
Your sex scenes are fucking hot. You shouldn't worry about writing them. You are very good at them.
Your sex scenes are fucking hot. You shouldn't worry about writing them. You are very good at them.
6/5/2017 c57 Liryca
What can I say?
1-. I loved this book, more than the first; But of course I did like first one too, is just preference, I guess. 3 3.
2-. I am in love with your protagonists. I love how far they have become. How terry grew and learned to say no -because at the beginning I kind of desliked his need to please selfish bastards, like John and Rufus- how he (in a way stopped being the damsel in distress) how Kieron started accepting Terry more and more. The glimpses of his past (little Kieron with flurry blue ears of five years hiding because he was scared, broke my heart) showing us the why of his persona. Every little detail you put into them and their relationship and their bond, culminating with the claiming. Bravo. I loved their character development.
3-. The freaking lake. The first time I read about it I was left kind of speechless. I mean such an interesting/scary kind of jail should have it's own mention.
4-. That Exrie is what... Kieron's twin? Brother? Father?!
I don't know what else to tell you? Only that I am very happy I found this series? That your style of writing is very pleasant and your plot very well thought out as well as this whole universe you invented; and that I am going to go read book 3 now, and that I wish there was a book 4 already out. I hope there is one soon?
Thank you for writing and sharing~
(Also as a mere curiosity to humans how does Kieron look? What kind color of hair does he have)
What can I say?
1-. I loved this book, more than the first; But of course I did like first one too, is just preference, I guess. 3 3.
2-. I am in love with your protagonists. I love how far they have become. How terry grew and learned to say no -because at the beginning I kind of desliked his need to please selfish bastards, like John and Rufus- how he (in a way stopped being the damsel in distress) how Kieron started accepting Terry more and more. The glimpses of his past (little Kieron with flurry blue ears of five years hiding because he was scared, broke my heart) showing us the why of his persona. Every little detail you put into them and their relationship and their bond, culminating with the claiming. Bravo. I loved their character development.
3-. The freaking lake. The first time I read about it I was left kind of speechless. I mean such an interesting/scary kind of jail should have it's own mention.
4-. That Exrie is what... Kieron's twin? Brother? Father?!
I don't know what else to tell you? Only that I am very happy I found this series? That your style of writing is very pleasant and your plot very well thought out as well as this whole universe you invented; and that I am going to go read book 3 now, and that I wish there was a book 4 already out. I hope there is one soon?
Thank you for writing and sharing~
(Also as a mere curiosity to humans how does Kieron look? What kind color of hair does he have)
7/9/2016 c57 Guest
I'd say that u wrapped this last chapter really great.. i love it a lot despite too much filler on the previous chapters..
I get that u perhaps want to show the intensity of the matter, or put depth into the story but seriously, it gets tiring after twelfth chapter and made me want to skip reading it instead. So perhaps relaying the very essence of 2nd chapter no more than twice, then get on with the stories..
If the reader ask too questions, or have any, it is more appealing to read both earlier series and speculating what would happen next.
So, brief john and tommy, but no rufus again, pleaseeeeeeeeeeee...
Thanks
Gfphidias
I'd say that u wrapped this last chapter really great.. i love it a lot despite too much filler on the previous chapters..
I get that u perhaps want to show the intensity of the matter, or put depth into the story but seriously, it gets tiring after twelfth chapter and made me want to skip reading it instead. So perhaps relaying the very essence of 2nd chapter no more than twice, then get on with the stories..
If the reader ask too questions, or have any, it is more appealing to read both earlier series and speculating what would happen next.
So, brief john and tommy, but no rufus again, pleaseeeeeeeeeeee...
Thanks
Gfphidias
7/7/2016 c31 Guest
I kinda liked these past chapters where kieron get to dying... it made him kinda human, or perhaps close exposure to terry do that to him.
Perhaps now i get to see he depends more on terry.. perhaps because terry got some action instead of kieron...
Or just that my mood telling me to like more drama. Who knows..
I kinda liked these past chapters where kieron get to dying... it made him kinda human, or perhaps close exposure to terry do that to him.
Perhaps now i get to see he depends more on terry.. perhaps because terry got some action instead of kieron...
Or just that my mood telling me to like more drama. Who knows..
7/6/2016 c6 Guest
Take as much time as u need to write... i m really are amazed at people like u.. who could keep writing even with small compensation in return. Lots of review still counts as small as they didnt literally pay the bill or fill your stomach..
Except perhaps thousands review could count..but yeah.. u're amazing that way..
Writing can be so fun too.. as for me it was for therapy, to keep me grounded and not become too manic.. not that i write something good, :) just enough..
Well, please know that i keep reading your fiction even if u didnt get review from me.
gfphidias yahoo /dot/ com
Take as much time as u need to write... i m really are amazed at people like u.. who could keep writing even with small compensation in return. Lots of review still counts as small as they didnt literally pay the bill or fill your stomach..
Except perhaps thousands review could count..but yeah.. u're amazing that way..
Writing can be so fun too.. as for me it was for therapy, to keep me grounded and not become too manic.. not that i write something good, :) just enough..
Well, please know that i keep reading your fiction even if u didnt get review from me.
gfphidias yahoo /dot/ com
5/17/2016 c43 LOK
I was so caught up in this amazing story (both prequel and this sequel) that I forgot to review. I am speechless all I can say is that I love this story, the characters and I can't wait to read more of this story as well as the next sequel.
I was so caught up in this amazing story (both prequel and this sequel) that I forgot to review. I am speechless all I can say is that I love this story, the characters and I can't wait to read more of this story as well as the next sequel.
1/26/2016 c56 SlashLover
Jesus Christ that was so fucking hot.
Jesus Christ that was so fucking hot.
1/26/2016 c49 SlashLover
God, your sex scenes are so hot.
I realize now, I really wanna know if Kieron's pubic hair is blue. Like it's some sort of imperative intel. Because I think it would be super hot in that way that is entirely Kieron.
God, your sex scenes are so hot.
I realize now, I really wanna know if Kieron's pubic hair is blue. Like it's some sort of imperative intel. Because I think it would be super hot in that way that is entirely Kieron.
1/25/2016 c46 SlashLover
I love the recurrence of "not up for debate" used by both of them.
I love the recurrence of "not up for debate" used by both of them.
1/25/2016 c23 SlashLover
Rereading this story as well. God this chapter is fucking hot. I love animalistic Kieron.
Rereading this story as well. God this chapter is fucking hot. I love animalistic Kieron.
3/8/2015 c57 SlashLover
Oh, God, I love this story. You're such an excellent writer and I absolutely love your characters.
I'm excited about the next installment.
Oh, God, I love this story. You're such an excellent writer and I absolutely love your characters.
I'm excited about the next installment.
2/5/2015 c57 
22Tenshi no Yami
I couldn't help grinning during this chapter. When Bekkah told them to throw on clothes, and Terry questioned her, I couldn't help but laugh when she told him that she didn't know they were actually naked. XD Terry telling them to fuck off and calling Terry 'his' was the icing on the cake.
This was quite the story in the making and I look forward to the next.
Thanks for the fun ride!
-Tensh out!
22Tenshi no YamiI couldn't help grinning during this chapter. When Bekkah told them to throw on clothes, and Terry questioned her, I couldn't help but laugh when she told him that she didn't know they were actually naked. XD Terry telling them to fuck off and calling Terry 'his' was the icing on the cake.
This was quite the story in the making and I look forward to the next.
Thanks for the fun ride!
-Tensh out!