for Lunch atop a Skyscraper10/1/2024 c27 Guest
thank you for updating! always love re-reading this story :) can’t wait to for the next update!
thank you for updating! always love re-reading this story :) can’t wait to for the next update!
5/24/2024 c27 starry3y3dangel
It was such a pleasant surprise to see your update for this story. It has been a while and every so often I would check back and re-read some of your stories. you're one of my fave authors here on FP and hope life is treating you well.
Glad to see them both at a better place one year later. Hopefully the next update won't take a year ;)
It was such a pleasant surprise to see your update for this story. It has been a while and every so often I would check back and re-read some of your stories. you're one of my fave authors here on FP and hope life is treating you well.
Glad to see them both at a better place one year later. Hopefully the next update won't take a year ;)
4/20/2024 c27 Guest
I didn't see the email notification that you'd updated, but I go back to your stories occasionally to re-read them, and seeing a new chapter made my heart explode! I ended up re-reading the whole story again and liked it even more the second time around.
I also really liked Abigail and her tentative friendship with Violet - they're truly two fantastic young women and I'm invested in a happy ending for both of them.
I didn't see the email notification that you'd updated, but I go back to your stories occasionally to re-read them, and seeing a new chapter made my heart explode! I ended up re-reading the whole story again and liked it even more the second time around.
I also really liked Abigail and her tentative friendship with Violet - they're truly two fantastic young women and I'm invested in a happy ending for both of them.
4/12/2024 c27 quibbler149
Wow. Wow wow wow. I didn't get an email notification but I checked this story like I do periodically every month for the last few years and I can't believe that you updated. This has made me so incredibly happy. Thank you.
To be honest, I wasn't totally sure how I wanted the aftermath of the night from the previous chapter to play out and I'm relieved that you did a time skip. I think having some time lapse to give them both some space and allow Violet to grow her confidence in herself was a great choice. I'm so glad that it was her decision to reconnect with Andrew so she can retain that agency for herself. She's not passively waiting anymore - she's making things happen now.
I'm really excited to see what comes next in this era for Andrew and Violet's story together. After all the miscommunication and indecision between them, it will be interesting to see the different dynamics in their new relationship. I'm looking forward to getting to know them after a year of growth.
Thank you again, you have no idea how much I have been hoping for an update. I never gave up hope that I could read the end of their story!
Wow. Wow wow wow. I didn't get an email notification but I checked this story like I do periodically every month for the last few years and I can't believe that you updated. This has made me so incredibly happy. Thank you.
To be honest, I wasn't totally sure how I wanted the aftermath of the night from the previous chapter to play out and I'm relieved that you did a time skip. I think having some time lapse to give them both some space and allow Violet to grow her confidence in herself was a great choice. I'm so glad that it was her decision to reconnect with Andrew so she can retain that agency for herself. She's not passively waiting anymore - she's making things happen now.
I'm really excited to see what comes next in this era for Andrew and Violet's story together. After all the miscommunication and indecision between them, it will be interesting to see the different dynamics in their new relationship. I'm looking forward to getting to know them after a year of growth.
Thank you again, you have no idea how much I have been hoping for an update. I never gave up hope that I could read the end of their story!
4/5/2024 c27 anon
omg i'm so happy you updated! you're my favorite author here. the time skip fits and i'm happy olive matured without adam, but i still want them to be together now that she has grown but they still evidently have feelings for each other. also liked the parallel with her and abigail (the pics adam has of their time together, them leaving adam...) loved this!
omg i'm so happy you updated! you're my favorite author here. the time skip fits and i'm happy olive matured without adam, but i still want them to be together now that she has grown but they still evidently have feelings for each other. also liked the parallel with her and abigail (the pics adam has of their time together, them leaving adam...) loved this!
3/31/2024 c27 Guest
I have been following this story for years and I wanted to let you know, it is so good and I hope you finish it!
I have been following this story for years and I wanted to let you know, it is so good and I hope you finish it!
3/15/2024 c27 yaraaaa
AHHHHHHHH I never would’ve expected you to come back to this story! But i’m so happy that you did. I read the last chapter and decided to reread the entire thing again. Quite shocked at the time skip but I feel like it slightly fits. I’ll write up a better review after my reread. But I am really happy that you came back to this story. Hope you are doing well!
AHHHHHHHH I never would’ve expected you to come back to this story! But i’m so happy that you did. I read the last chapter and decided to reread the entire thing again. Quite shocked at the time skip but I feel like it slightly fits. I’ll write up a better review after my reread. But I am really happy that you came back to this story. Hope you are doing well!
6/22/2020 c1 brunique
I’ve been following this Author and story for the last decade and I’m still here 5 years later hoping for an update x please finish the story
I’ve been following this Author and story for the last decade and I’m still here 5 years later hoping for an update x please finish the story
4/26/2020 c26 Kay
Hi. Just want to let you I am still checking for any kind of update occasionally, just in case there’s something with email notification. I also reread your other stories because it feels good reading well written stories and you are my favorite author. Please keep writing. Thank you.
Hi. Just want to let you I am still checking for any kind of update occasionally, just in case there’s something with email notification. I also reread your other stories because it feels good reading well written stories and you are my favorite author. Please keep writing. Thank you.
7/30/2019 c26 Mikariangel
Hello! Dont know if you still check this or if you're still writing, but just wanted to say that I love this story! The character development and plot are all amazing:))) keep writing! Also would love to see something from Andrew's POV
Hello! Dont know if you still check this or if you're still writing, but just wanted to say that I love this story! The character development and plot are all amazing:))) keep writing! Also would love to see something from Andrew's POV
5/5/2019 c26 Guest
Are you going to finish this book?
Are you going to finish this book?
12/28/2018 c25 
1Du
So, I just reread this again, because once you start with a Williams kick, you just have to finish with them all. I had forgotten how much this story moved me- as much as I love all the other Williams’ stories (including The Catch!) this one is so profound and complex that it pulls at all my strings, and not just because of all the photography (for which I am a sucker), but because of how difficult and real everything seems and how well you manage to convey it all. Violet is so normal that it is extremely easy to relate to her... Damn. I love this one so much! Because of Violet, because of Andrew and Abigail, because of Paul, and because of all the Williams and how well they interact with each other (such an endearing family!). I cannot express well enough how impressive I find what you have done with all these characters, and how brilliant I find your writing. I keep wishing you finish this story, but even if you don’t I’m quite happy with everything as it is, because even if Violet’s happy ending is not here yet (and even though I really need her to have one), their relationship right now is too flawed and imperfect- and that is real, very real. So if you ever add on to this story, I hope you continue with this line of writing: their relationship is so full of mistakes on both parts that it has a lot to go through yet before they get anywhere ‘happy’- if they do get there. But that’s just my take, whatever you decide to do with this story, whether you make them fix it all quickly, draw out the angst or even make Andrew go back to Abigail- I would be really happy to read and review. And if you don’t continue this- well that’s our loss, really.
Sorry for such long review, I just really wanted to show some appreciation for your writing.
I hope life is giving you everything you want from it. Happy holidays! :)
1DuSo, I just reread this again, because once you start with a Williams kick, you just have to finish with them all. I had forgotten how much this story moved me- as much as I love all the other Williams’ stories (including The Catch!) this one is so profound and complex that it pulls at all my strings, and not just because of all the photography (for which I am a sucker), but because of how difficult and real everything seems and how well you manage to convey it all. Violet is so normal that it is extremely easy to relate to her... Damn. I love this one so much! Because of Violet, because of Andrew and Abigail, because of Paul, and because of all the Williams and how well they interact with each other (such an endearing family!). I cannot express well enough how impressive I find what you have done with all these characters, and how brilliant I find your writing. I keep wishing you finish this story, but even if you don’t I’m quite happy with everything as it is, because even if Violet’s happy ending is not here yet (and even though I really need her to have one), their relationship right now is too flawed and imperfect- and that is real, very real. So if you ever add on to this story, I hope you continue with this line of writing: their relationship is so full of mistakes on both parts that it has a lot to go through yet before they get anywhere ‘happy’- if they do get there. But that’s just my take, whatever you decide to do with this story, whether you make them fix it all quickly, draw out the angst or even make Andrew go back to Abigail- I would be really happy to read and review. And if you don’t continue this- well that’s our loss, really.
Sorry for such long review, I just really wanted to show some appreciation for your writing.
I hope life is giving you everything you want from it. Happy holidays! :)
10/29/2018 c9 REGRETABLE
Ok, so far - LOVE THIS. the only thing I didn't care for was this idea that she's "fallen for him" and all of her reasons are very self centered. 'andrew told me not to let my sister get to me, Andrew saved me while I was drunk' - although they do show a few good characteristics Andrew is made of, she really doesn't know much about him - it would have been amazing to hear her talk about who he is as a man, or the actual character in those actions. It just felt like she was so focused on what he was doing for her or what he can bring to her, versus who he is as an individual. If you do ever decide to edit or revise this story, I would hope you would amend that, and maybe add in some more moments where she can get to know him as a whole.
I really love this story though- it's adorable and sweet.
Ok, so far - LOVE THIS. the only thing I didn't care for was this idea that she's "fallen for him" and all of her reasons are very self centered. 'andrew told me not to let my sister get to me, Andrew saved me while I was drunk' - although they do show a few good characteristics Andrew is made of, she really doesn't know much about him - it would have been amazing to hear her talk about who he is as a man, or the actual character in those actions. It just felt like she was so focused on what he was doing for her or what he can bring to her, versus who he is as an individual. If you do ever decide to edit or revise this story, I would hope you would amend that, and maybe add in some more moments where she can get to know him as a whole.
I really love this story though- it's adorable and sweet.