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5/30/2014 c1 4Veronica Fay
Wow. This was really well written and I could sense what the pov was talking about, as a reader you could feel the fear. Loved it. Great job
10/27/2013 c1 12UniverseAnxiety
A bit vague. I wish you went into more detail on what It makes you feel or what exactly It does to give the readers a better idea of It (or at least their own perception of It). Or was that your intention?

Anyway, nicely written.

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