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1/18/2019 c23 Loved it
Yes i cant believe it so sweet love that it took them time good job incredibly good i hope to read the second story so awesome
1/18/2019 c20 Amazing
I mean like should she have gotten that mad nah but shes been through a lot and you know how she already was about guys so of course she went that far but ugh how sucky i loved it gold job cant wait to see what comes next
1/18/2019 c17 Omg
The secret was crazy cant believe she never noticed how he could be its sad to think that this kind of stuff could happen on the reg why do we do these things go through these things
1/18/2019 c15 Crazy
Omgoshhhhhh its happening hes gonna regret caring about pete is marc gonna do time hes an accomplice even if he doesnt wanna be omgosh hes gonna hate himself the person is related to her case and her case is her father and he just let it happen had he said something his mother never wouldve died or they all wouldve died by laurens hand if she went crazy
1/17/2019 c7 Love
Love that they're falling for each other slowly abd that hes still being his dumb self and damn is it her dad that set the place up does he really wanna kill her? Or just hurt the mom that bad? Cant wait for their unite lolol
1/17/2019 c4 Goodjob
I didnt like waiting for the set up a lot of stories ymuse these kind of set ups but honestly thats what im here for as well really good story like that yhey do feel things for each other even though they dont want to i cant wait to see what happens is it bad that i want him to hurt her anyways when they fall for each other in the end lol
12/28/2014 c23 2renegade01
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Loved the sweet ending ;-)
7/22/2014 c23 Grespitchied
The story was really enjoyable. I was amused by Marc's character. He's very intense. I found his apologetic schemes very sweet and original. The letters he sent were so heart warming. I'm glad I cam upon this story.
4/19/2014 c23 RiverCross84
I love that they did everything backwards... I'm glad these two got their happy ending. ;)
4/13/2014 c23 Abbey
By the way, I'd love to read a story on Jade. I hope there'll be some updates on Marcus and Alexis.

And after I checked out your other stories, I JUST realized that you wrote Delicate Hearts. I mean, I remember you mentioning that story, but I didn't realize that it was the one I've been reading. I'm enjoying that one, as well.

I also just found out that English isn't your first language. Your writing is impressive, though.
4/13/2014 c23 Abbey
I've enjoyed reading this. I haven't reviewed for too many chapters because I was too busy reading them, haha.

I love Marcus's letters to her, and his romantic gestures didn't seem entirely cheesy (maybe it was because of the way you narrated them). I'm surprised they were just friends for a year. However, they have been through a lot, and I'm just glad everything worked out fine. Alexis doing the marriage proposal was a nice twist :)
4/13/2014 c4 Abbey
The whole "boy and girl hate each other before they fall for each other" is probably my most favorite cliche. I'd love to see how Marcus would react when Alex is the one seducing him...I'm kinda hoping for a situation like this.
4/13/2014 c3 Abbey
I'm loving that foreshadowing at the end.
4/12/2014 c4 Lita Evencort
I love the way you have started off with the story. I foretell a very passionate ending 3
4/12/2014 c2 Abbey
I personally liked the first chapter. Not much was going on plot-wise, but it was a great build-up chapter. This one was an amazing read, as well. I love the changing point of views and how it shows the misunderstandings between Alexis and Marcus.
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