for He's Been Right There4/23/2015 c9 fellow desi
eeeeep, finally.. I can't tell you how happy I am bc they kissed and what a perfect kiss. I love Jack's nickname for her
eeeeep, finally.. I can't tell you how happy I am bc they kissed and what a perfect kiss. I love Jack's nickname for her
4/23/2015 c7 fellow desi
I can't wait for the talent competition. Jack really loves her, and I'm glad that she has finally realized that she loves him too
I can't wait for the talent competition. Jack really loves her, and I'm glad that she has finally realized that she loves him too
4/23/2015 c6 fellow desi
I knew it. He lost the bet on purpose. I love their chemistry
I knew it. He lost the bet on purpose. I love their chemistry
4/23/2015 c5 fellow desi
Hot damn girl, I want to be woken up by a half naked Jack. Why are all the boys I like Fictional *sigh*
Hot damn girl, I want to be woken up by a half naked Jack. Why are all the boys I like Fictional *sigh*
4/23/2015 c4 fellow desi
When you said rich, I thought you meant more-than-comfortable, wear-only-brands rich not billionaire rich. Eh whatev.
Did Jack lose the bet on purpose? Is he going to send his brothers and be the only one in Sophie's car. Sophie is so clueless...
When you said rich, I thought you meant more-than-comfortable, wear-only-brands rich not billionaire rich. Eh whatev.
Did Jack lose the bet on purpose? Is he going to send his brothers and be the only one in Sophie's car. Sophie is so clueless...
4/22/2015 c3 fellow desi
I can't tell you how happy it makes me to see a really good story by an Indian. I really like your story and love the characters. I love how Sophie is the only one who can easily tell the difference between the brothers. I had a pair of Identical twins in my class and I could not tell who was who because of school uniforms. Most people couldn't especially the teachers, it was a fun time..
I can't tell you how happy it makes me to see a really good story by an Indian. I really like your story and love the characters. I love how Sophie is the only one who can easily tell the difference between the brothers. I had a pair of Identical twins in my class and I could not tell who was who because of school uniforms. Most people couldn't especially the teachers, it was a fun time..
2/15/2015 c23 doodling65
I can't believe it's finished! I want more Sophie and jack! I'm excited for Christians story though
I can't believe it's finished! I want more Sophie and jack! I'm excited for Christians story though
2/14/2015 c23 Bootybootybangbang
It's over and I don't know what do with my life, im probably gonna go cry in a corner forever
It's over and I don't know what do with my life, im probably gonna go cry in a corner forever
2/14/2015 c23 Jester79
How dreadful for Jack to have seen that and went through that. Moving on to fun stuff...very nice.
How dreadful for Jack to have seen that and went through that. Moving on to fun stuff...very nice.
2/3/2015 c21 doodling65
I can't believe it's coming to an end! I'm excited how Sophie and jacks relationship will progress in these last few chapters.
I can't believe it's coming to an end! I'm excited how Sophie and jacks relationship will progress in these last few chapters.
2/2/2015 c21 Jester79
I so love seeing this updated. I'm glad they made amends and gotten things sorted out.
I so love seeing this updated. I'm glad they made amends and gotten things sorted out.
12/9/2014 c19 
1foxfaceish
Waaaaah! I have read all of these chapters and i have totally fallen in love with your story and characters. I am really looking forward to your next chapter!
1foxfaceishWaaaaah! I have read all of these chapters and i have totally fallen in love with your story and characters. I am really looking forward to your next chapter!
10/19/2014 c18 ghg
Great story! Please update soon!
Great story! Please update soon!