for He's Been Right There6/21/2014 c15 doodling65
I love them! Please keep this going for like, 30 chapters! Haha I really love it
I love them! Please keep this going for like, 30 chapters! Haha I really love it
6/21/2014 c15 
2DazzLing xD
YES I KNEW SHE'D HAVE ANASTASIA'S DRESS!
They should totally win the fashion show because 1 that authentic dress, and 2 he calls her Anya on a regular basis!
Awwww best boyfriend! She's finally acknowledging their togetherness. And Jack! Ohmygosh! "She's the reason I broke up with ever girl I've ever dated." PERFECT JUST PERFECT
2DazzLing xDYES I KNEW SHE'D HAVE ANASTASIA'S DRESS!
They should totally win the fashion show because 1 that authentic dress, and 2 he calls her Anya on a regular basis!
Awwww best boyfriend! She's finally acknowledging their togetherness. And Jack! Ohmygosh! "She's the reason I broke up with ever girl I've ever dated." PERFECT JUST PERFECT
6/21/2014 c15 1azeeunlove
Chapter 15 is the same as Chapter 14! I think you uploaded the wrong chapter.
1azeeunloveChapter 15 is the same as Chapter 14! I think you uploaded the wrong chapter.
5/1/2014 c14 mylittleprincess
love this story so much, update more please:)
love this story so much, update more please:)
5/1/2014 c14 Guest
I love your story so much! Its wonderful! You're a talented writer.
I love your story so much! Its wonderful! You're a talented writer.
5/1/2014 c14 doodling65
I love jack and Sophie! I hope this story isn't nearing the end, I love it too much.
I love jack and Sophie! I hope this story isn't nearing the end, I love it too much.
5/1/2014 c14 Jester79
That was great and fun chapter. I like how they interact with each other - it's a good time all around. Her dad though, seems to be only concerned with "her grades / classes" rather than her - jerk! At least that's what it seems like when he's called "several" times and then when he does speak to her - it's just stupid stuff - not really "fatherly". Of course, that was pretty much brought to light earlier in the story. Ready for more :)
That was great and fun chapter. I like how they interact with each other - it's a good time all around. Her dad though, seems to be only concerned with "her grades / classes" rather than her - jerk! At least that's what it seems like when he's called "several" times and then when he does speak to her - it's just stupid stuff - not really "fatherly". Of course, that was pretty much brought to light earlier in the story. Ready for more :)
5/1/2014 c14 2Cat Lili
I like that you are giving Christian a bit more of a role in this chapter. Just a little more than 'one of the brothers'. I also enjoy hearing more from Mrs. Grace, she's a strange mom... But that seems to be working well.
2Cat LiliI like that you are giving Christian a bit more of a role in this chapter. Just a little more than 'one of the brothers'. I also enjoy hearing more from Mrs. Grace, she's a strange mom... But that seems to be working well.
4/21/2014 c11 2rusty-reader998
The story is going awesome but there is one thing I wanted to point out. Why does her mother use the word "ass" aren't they suppose to stop the children from abusing but instead she's using bad words herself it doesn't fit in well.
2rusty-reader998The story is going awesome but there is one thing I wanted to point out. Why does her mother use the word "ass" aren't they suppose to stop the children from abusing but instead she's using bad words herself it doesn't fit in well.
4/9/2014 c13 Guest
Ahhh I love you! I love that scene!
Ahhh I love you! I love that scene!
4/9/2014 c13 Jax
So, Madame Frigid seems like a ridiculous name, but then I realize that I go to a place called "Dr. Gelato", so who knows. Also, good update, though you just leave me craving more :)
So, Madame Frigid seems like a ridiculous name, but then I realize that I go to a place called "Dr. Gelato", so who knows. Also, good update, though you just leave me craving more :)
4/10/2014 c13 2DazzLing xD
I love them. Thank you for updating so quickly! I hope their costume is Anastasia and Dimitri. It would be adorable! I'm excited for whatever you come up with!
2DazzLing xDI love them. Thank you for updating so quickly! I hope their costume is Anastasia and Dimitri. It would be adorable! I'm excited for whatever you come up with!
4/9/2014 c12 Jester79
Glad that they were able to settle things before they got out of control. I really enjoy seeing them together.
Glad that they were able to settle things before they got out of control. I really enjoy seeing them together.