12/27/2013 c4 Guest
I love this. David needs someone too, please. He's awesome:D
I love this. David needs someone too, please. He's awesome:D
12/18/2013 c4 meow
awesome story (:
awesome story (:
12/18/2013 c4 Jester79
Really enjoy Jack & Sophia's interactions. Their hilarious and fun. Can't wait to see where you take this. The whole family is great.
Really enjoy Jack & Sophia's interactions. Their hilarious and fun. Can't wait to see where you take this. The whole family is great.
12/10/2013 c3 skye real
Gawd, Jack is simply delicious! I'd totally jump him ;-) lol. Great plot I'm lovin' it!
Gawd, Jack is simply delicious! I'd totally jump him ;-) lol. Great plot I'm lovin' it!
12/10/2013 c3 Yoorie
I really love the story so far! I like your writing style and how it engages me in a way where I can imagine or visualize the scenes and characters. I definitely look forward to reading more and finding out how this wonderful romance will end out. Keep up the good work! I will be awaiting the next update.
I really love the story so far! I like your writing style and how it engages me in a way where I can imagine or visualize the scenes and characters. I definitely look forward to reading more and finding out how this wonderful romance will end out. Keep up the good work! I will be awaiting the next update.
12/9/2013 c3 jennielove
awww man! i really enjoyed this story. how could u keep us hanging like that?:( please complete it...
awww man! i really enjoyed this story. how could u keep us hanging like that?:( please complete it...
11/24/2013 c2 Connie
I love how this story is starting this is a real good start
I love how this story is starting this is a real good start