11/1/2013 c12 Nevermore23
I'm not sure how I feel about this story. I don't like it as much as your other stories. It seems like it is two different stories that you tied together. The first about a prostitute that was impregnated by an alien and the other about a prostitute that was altered to fit many different aliens. I liked the beginning, I loved the idea of how he was impregnated and how he was treated, and I especially loved the first chapter when he was being impregnated. I just didn't really like how it became about something completely different after. I'm not big on stories that just tell about the different men a prostitute is with.

I still really like your writing, and I can't wait to read your next story! :)