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12/29/2013 c1 Julietish
Hey, it's Juliet! Star-Cross'd entries always get a review from me, so here is yours. I really, really liked how her love interest is never referred to by name, but by he/him instead. This was such a nice touch. It's very difficult to pull off an introductory narration like that without dragging on, but you did it extremely well-I did not lose interest once. That line about what your first crush represents was quite relatable and my favorite from the whole one-shot. The way you handled the ending was so clever. Choosing a winner this round was absolutely heart-wrenching and I just wanted to let you know that your one-shot definitely was within the list of finalists.
11/6/2013 c1 67AlysonSerenaStone
Nice work! I really enjoyed reading this! Fluff is an amazing thing to read. I'm also going to enter Star Crossed and your story set the bar high.
11/2/2013 c1 2renegade01
Definitely keep the last line -thats awesome :-)

Cute and innocent. Love it
11/1/2013 c1 Sparklingjewel12
Awwwwwwwwwww
11/1/2013 c1 1Fanatical Dreamer
Amazing. The story was very well written, and you portrayed the main character's feelings well. I loved it!

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