for Positively Negative REWRITE7/3/2016 c1 serwaverider
I see there are 8 chapters less. If I may I would like to ask why you re-wrote PN.
I see there are 8 chapters less. If I may I would like to ask why you re-wrote PN.
3/7/2016 c31 NHGal603
This story drew me in with a vengeance. The characters are so real - imperfect, a bit jaded, but still somehow innocent and naive. You're a tremendously talented author. Have you been published?
This story drew me in with a vengeance. The characters are so real - imperfect, a bit jaded, but still somehow innocent and naive. You're a tremendously talented author. Have you been published?
26/24/2015 c30 MingTea
To be honest it took me a minute to really get into this story but man am I INTO IT. I feel so drawn in and invested now and I really like your writing and I'm excited to see what happens next.
To be honest it took me a minute to really get into this story but man am I INTO IT. I feel so drawn in and invested now and I really like your writing and I'm excited to see what happens next.
10/27/2014 c26 Linq
Wow it's been a long time since I've seen an update in my inbox for this story.
And sorry I didn't read them sooner, I've been meaning to but I've just been tied down all year :)
But shit, this is just getting so intense now. Your writing has really improved too, it's really enamouring! And I really like how this isn't just a carbon-copy of your original version, I'm loving the new spins, new characters and new characterisations and personalities. This is just getting so much more interesting.
Lately I don't have the patience to read slash fiction or school-based fictions on here anymore because they are all the same, but this one is just so much different, so much better.
Looking forward to an update soon :D
Wow it's been a long time since I've seen an update in my inbox for this story.
And sorry I didn't read them sooner, I've been meaning to but I've just been tied down all year :)
But shit, this is just getting so intense now. Your writing has really improved too, it's really enamouring! And I really like how this isn't just a carbon-copy of your original version, I'm loving the new spins, new characters and new characterisations and personalities. This is just getting so much more interesting.
Lately I don't have the patience to read slash fiction or school-based fictions on here anymore because they are all the same, but this one is just so much different, so much better.
Looking forward to an update soon :D
8/8/2014 c24 Guest
Nice. I like how Freddie keeps on popping up out of nowhere lol. But I can't tell if he wants to help joey with his problems because he can relate. Or if he just doesn't care. Did he and joey ever clear up what happened and the fact that joey never participated in making fun of freddie and bullying him?if so, then it seems like Freddie should help and not just run away...
Nice. I like how Freddie keeps on popping up out of nowhere lol. But I can't tell if he wants to help joey with his problems because he can relate. Or if he just doesn't care. Did he and joey ever clear up what happened and the fact that joey never participated in making fun of freddie and bullying him?if so, then it seems like Freddie should help and not just run away...
1/18/2014 c21 Linq
I haaaaaaate Courtney jesus christ. I'd forgotten that she and Ryan had a thing from the original version. I'm glad Joey and Courtney are done though.
And hahah wow this might be a little awkward for Freddie ;)
I'm glad you're continuing this though, I really like it :D
I haaaaaaate Courtney jesus christ. I'd forgotten that she and Ryan had a thing from the original version. I'm glad Joey and Courtney are done though.
And hahah wow this might be a little awkward for Freddie ;)
I'm glad you're continuing this though, I really like it :D
1/12/2014 c20 Linq
Ahhh I really missed this!
And am I crazy or is Sherry a bit... Toxic? I don't know but I've never really liked her XD I think she's a bit of a cow. Maybe that's just me over analysing things?
Anyway looking forward to an update!
Ahhh I really missed this!
And am I crazy or is Sherry a bit... Toxic? I don't know but I've never really liked her XD I think she's a bit of a cow. Maybe that's just me over analysing things?
Anyway looking forward to an update!
12/7/2013 c19 Linq
I love how they're both getting along so well! It's so cute and stuff. And Freddie having a crush on Joey? Awwwww
You should definitely write a scene where they're both cuddling in onesies XD a cat onesie for Freddie maybe? I see him as a cat person
And take your time with writing, I love the fast updates, but I don't want you to stress yourself out! Really glad you're going to continue this though :)
I love how they're both getting along so well! It's so cute and stuff. And Freddie having a crush on Joey? Awwwww
You should definitely write a scene where they're both cuddling in onesies XD a cat onesie for Freddie maybe? I see him as a cat person
And take your time with writing, I love the fast updates, but I don't want you to stress yourself out! Really glad you're going to continue this though :)
11/26/2013 c18 Linq
Awww that was so cute :D and the tiger onesie was definitely adorable! I hope you continue this after November if you don't make it (I'm sure you will though) :)
Awww that was so cute :D and the tiger onesie was definitely adorable! I hope you continue this after November if you don't make it (I'm sure you will though) :)