for Boys Bantam: How I Found a Girl at my All-Boys Summer Camp5/2/2021 c1 Joeson
I can't get enough of your book. The storytelling is just perfect. Why don't you tpublish your work on NovelStar? A lot of readers will surely love your book.
I can't get enough of your book. The storytelling is just perfect. Why don't you tpublish your work on NovelStar? A lot of readers will surely love your book.
6/12/2018 c1 
7Nemone
Oh wow I love this already. I was into the story before I knew it and I love the MC already. His mom seems like a total capital B. The other characters are also interesting and I love how their personalities and appearances are already forming in my head.
7NemoneOh wow I love this already. I was into the story before I knew it and I love the MC already. His mom seems like a total capital B. The other characters are also interesting and I love how their personalities and appearances are already forming in my head.
10/2/2017 c4 Brooklyn
Update! Update! So so so fucking good!
Update! Update! So so so fucking good!
12/30/2016 c3 Queen.of.the.Ashes
Now that you have 500 reviews please tell me you will be inspired to write. I'm super curious about Nick 'troubles' and I'm guessing/hoping that Tad is the love interest because I ship it!
Now that you have 500 reviews please tell me you will be inspired to write. I'm super curious about Nick 'troubles' and I'm guessing/hoping that Tad is the love interest because I ship it!
5/15/2016 c4 Toto
nice hope it works out 4 u
heart kenny linc
nice hope it works out 4 u
heart kenny linc
3/12/2016 c3 FanofPrevDraft
So, judging by the summary and how this has been going so far, this isn't going to be a NickxKiwi, pairing? Or if it is, there isn't going to be that mind blowing plot twist? Well, I guess I'll just have to wait and see I guess... I have to wonder though, what made you rewrite the entire thing?
So, judging by the summary and how this has been going so far, this isn't going to be a NickxKiwi, pairing? Or if it is, there isn't going to be that mind blowing plot twist? Well, I guess I'll just have to wait and see I guess... I have to wonder though, what made you rewrite the entire thing?
3/10/2016 c3 Totes
*heart face*
*heart face*
2/22/2016 c1 4SForces
The story starts out pretty interesting. One thing that I did notice is you described the minor characters in more detail than the main characters. If I were to close my eyes right now and try to visual Dan or Nicky all I would see is their gender. Yet I know a scratchy description of the bus driver, of Kenny and of Linc. They stick out like sore thumbs in your book yet Nicky and Dan or described nowhere.
4SForcesThe story starts out pretty interesting. One thing that I did notice is you described the minor characters in more detail than the main characters. If I were to close my eyes right now and try to visual Dan or Nicky all I would see is their gender. Yet I know a scratchy description of the bus driver, of Kenny and of Linc. They stick out like sore thumbs in your book yet Nicky and Dan or described nowhere.
2/21/2016 c1 7BunnyChoi
Hello! :)
I'm returning your review! :D
So far I enjoyed reading this story. Although I think this plot is very interesting, I feel like I need to read more to fully understand what's going on. I saw that it was up to 26 chapters, but now there is only one. xD
Also, I noticed you posted chapter one twice. Didn't know if you were aware of that or not!
From what I have seen so far, Nicky is a very complex character that has parents that just don't understand how to handle him. I want to get to know him more!
I only really saw one error, just a minor one:
"...seat toward me as I hopped out, I and slung it over my shoulder..." Take out the extra 'I'. :)
Over all, very interesting and would love to read more!
Take care and keep writing!
~BunnyChoi
7BunnyChoiHello! :)
I'm returning your review! :D
So far I enjoyed reading this story. Although I think this plot is very interesting, I feel like I need to read more to fully understand what's going on. I saw that it was up to 26 chapters, but now there is only one. xD
Also, I noticed you posted chapter one twice. Didn't know if you were aware of that or not!
From what I have seen so far, Nicky is a very complex character that has parents that just don't understand how to handle him. I want to get to know him more!
I only really saw one error, just a minor one:
"...seat toward me as I hopped out, I and slung it over my shoulder..." Take out the extra 'I'. :)
Over all, very interesting and would love to read more!
Take care and keep writing!
~BunnyChoi
2/20/2016 c1 Totes
good job bob i like it
good job bob i like it
2/15/2016 c26 will
In the wise words of Thor "Another!"
In the wise words of Thor "Another!"
2/12/2016 c26 Anonyreader
Welp, your story has me hooked. PLEASE continue the story. I'm really enjoying it and looking forward to the next chapter!
Welp, your story has me hooked. PLEASE continue the story. I'm really enjoying it and looking forward to the next chapter!
1/6/2016 c26 Guest
Pls more
Pls more