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3/23/2014 c1 Lily Mayflower
Like it. And I even imagined how it would sound as a song :)
1/4/2014 c1 36Anna Christie
Very pretty. And emotional. I especially like some of your metaphors because they aren't the typical kind. For instance, "You're like the white-tipped waves of the ocean" is a brilliant comparison and a lovely line. This would be really pretty as a ballad, I think. :D
12/13/2013 c1 Sya Rael
Ohh MY GOSH! I really LOVED THIS! It brings memories, I love music and this is awesome!

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