for Some Kind of Something7/13/2016 c9 Elico
Hi, I just wanted to say I'm sorry about what happened to your computer, but I'm glad you're still writing. I just recently found this story and I absolutely love it. The characters are not only realistic but each new development leaves me wanting to read more. I especially like how your plot is not only progressing but the speed at which it is. Most stories I find these days rush to the pairing and the characters just push aside their issues to be together and that's the end of it. I appreciate you taking the time to let the relationships develop naturally.
Hi, I just wanted to say I'm sorry about what happened to your computer, but I'm glad you're still writing. I just recently found this story and I absolutely love it. The characters are not only realistic but each new development leaves me wanting to read more. I especially like how your plot is not only progressing but the speed at which it is. Most stories I find these days rush to the pairing and the characters just push aside their issues to be together and that's the end of it. I appreciate you taking the time to let the relationships develop naturally.
4/20/2015 c7 
9SpiedCookie126
I really like your story so far; it's rare to see a 'puppy in wolves clothing' story. I think so far, my favorite character is Seth because I can relate to him the most; an awkward character with a great sense if humor with just the right amount of character in him (though in my case, it's weirdness in strides). I know your story will grow to be amazing when I worry for the characters as if I could jump in and make things better (or at least more awkward and weird, but you can't always be as amazing as Asher. Sigh...). I hope for an update soonish, as it's been a year; but if a story's done... I wish that I could see some more author to reader communication when it comes to the story; like if you have writer's block, then ask for help, or an explanation of why things are taking a while; no matter what the situation is, we'll be here for you (unless we're all dead, then...). But enough of that, looking forwards to another chapter, I so wish that more people would look at your work, just based on the amount of reviews you've gotten; but they're just missing out on Miles' smexy accent!
- SC126
P.S. Nooo, Miles! Don't proverbially die of emotional stress!
P.P.S. I love the new conflict of Joshua as an antagonist. Looking forwards to getting to know Bones more too.
9SpiedCookie126I really like your story so far; it's rare to see a 'puppy in wolves clothing' story. I think so far, my favorite character is Seth because I can relate to him the most; an awkward character with a great sense if humor with just the right amount of character in him (though in my case, it's weirdness in strides). I know your story will grow to be amazing when I worry for the characters as if I could jump in and make things better (or at least more awkward and weird, but you can't always be as amazing as Asher. Sigh...). I hope for an update soonish, as it's been a year; but if a story's done... I wish that I could see some more author to reader communication when it comes to the story; like if you have writer's block, then ask for help, or an explanation of why things are taking a while; no matter what the situation is, we'll be here for you (unless we're all dead, then...). But enough of that, looking forwards to another chapter, I so wish that more people would look at your work, just based on the amount of reviews you've gotten; but they're just missing out on Miles' smexy accent!
- SC126
P.S. Nooo, Miles! Don't proverbially die of emotional stress!
P.P.S. I love the new conflict of Joshua as an antagonist. Looking forwards to getting to know Bones more too.
5/28/2014 c7 28TriploblasticSkies
You know, this is like SOOO sweet of you! I'm so honored to have something dedicated to me. Trust me. And as for your apology -you needn't, darling. I LOVED it. Especially everything about Miles... gosh, that boy's doing something to me. See, I even pant while thinking about him, Lol. Well, the other reason could be that I imagine him as someone I had a crush on once... but, well, let's not get deeper into that.
I mean, man, your writing is so good! It's got this humorous, sarcastic edge, laced in a classical yet modernized tone. And the characters, as I've said many times, are wonderful. I like Bones too. I don't know why, but he's... yummy. Kinda like those straight guys I would love to see in a slash MEP.
And everything in Miles' part was absolutely amazing. From the writing to the small hints of him running away from someone... and yes, of course, his fretting over Seth's expressions.
I believe the Latin phrase is related to an abusive relationship, or some other situation, rather than death -as it usually does. So, Miles likes metal, huh?
Once again, thank you for everything. I loved it. And sorry for the short review -and late too. But, you know, I might even not be able to review every chapter since I don't get internet for a looooong time... but please know I'll always manage to read and love this story. And anyways, I'm very much interested what's really gonna happen with the three.
28TriploblasticSkiesYou know, this is like SOOO sweet of you! I'm so honored to have something dedicated to me. Trust me. And as for your apology -you needn't, darling. I LOVED it. Especially everything about Miles... gosh, that boy's doing something to me. See, I even pant while thinking about him, Lol. Well, the other reason could be that I imagine him as someone I had a crush on once... but, well, let's not get deeper into that.
I mean, man, your writing is so good! It's got this humorous, sarcastic edge, laced in a classical yet modernized tone. And the characters, as I've said many times, are wonderful. I like Bones too. I don't know why, but he's... yummy. Kinda like those straight guys I would love to see in a slash MEP.
And everything in Miles' part was absolutely amazing. From the writing to the small hints of him running away from someone... and yes, of course, his fretting over Seth's expressions.
I believe the Latin phrase is related to an abusive relationship, or some other situation, rather than death -as it usually does. So, Miles likes metal, huh?
Once again, thank you for everything. I loved it. And sorry for the short review -and late too. But, you know, I might even not be able to review every chapter since I don't get internet for a looooong time... but please know I'll always manage to read and love this story. And anyways, I'm very much interested what's really gonna happen with the three.
3/6/2014 c5 Shita
So, like, I'm on FP but feeling kinda lazy to log in so that's why it's a guest review...
Anyways, allow me to tell you how ardently I admire and love this story! And even though I'm no Mr. Darcy -I'm a girl, so I really cannot be him -but god am I in love with this story! And Miles, especially Miles. I believe I have written this before too, but goodness, I wish I could get my hands on a guy like him in reality. If they exist.
He's fucking awesome. And his accent... Although I really don't know how his accent actually is, considering the fact that I have heard neither an Australian accent nor Irish ever before, but the way you described it kinda made me feel like dirt on the ground you walk on, 'cuz man, can anyone ever be so talented in writing? And here I was, thinking that I was done with writing, but reading this story alone inspires me. Now, my goal is to compete, Lol. Just kiddin'. It'll take me millions of years to write a piece even half good as this one! Over all, I just LOVE the way it's written. A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
Hmm, Seth... Well, what should I say about him? As Asher described him -I really find him cute, by the way -he's like a puppy in a wolf's body. And man am I excited to see the wolf get out! Aw, his blushing alone makes me wanna squeeze him! Aw, now I wish I had a Seth-plushie, or better yet, Miles-plushie, that would be like so friggin' awesome, right?
I'm kinda lost where it came in the last two chapters since I was reading the story instead of sleeping or studying for my Hindi exam tomorrow, but there was a scene where Seth found Asher's ass absolutely delicious, and it made ME want to get inside the computer and eat him up.
Now, let me return to my fav topic, Miles. I'm kind of acting like I got all the energy from Ash, but eh, whatever. Is he an assault victim? I'm sorry if I'm kinda slow or something, but I was too busy admiring the writing style and Miles himself that I didn't do enough justice to paying attention to the plot. Lol. My apologies. So, anyways, is he? An assault victim, I mean? Or does he have AIDS or some disease? I think it's the former, since he's been talking about the dead years, right?
I really like Remy's 'Fuck mine' dialogue. That scene where she practically got Seth nervous, yeah? That was fucking brilliant. And the dialogues exchanged between the Strife brothers, this one:
"Figuratively, I hope."
"Figuratively, of course."
Aw, he's so protective! An' by the end, I kinda started feeling depressed seeing how Miles was feeling that really heart-bugging mixture of emotions. I don't really get what Asher's up to, though, 'cuz, one minute he's all clingy over Seth and the next he's telling Miles that the boy might be good for him... hmm, guess I'll just have to wait for another long chapter, yeah? Lol.
Oh, and I'm so sorry I cannot review each chapter, but that's all due to me being a lazy-ass with an equally lazy connection and a very demanding study routine. Hope I get to read the next chapter soon, though!
-GrayFullbusterfangirl on FictionPress
So, like, I'm on FP but feeling kinda lazy to log in so that's why it's a guest review...
Anyways, allow me to tell you how ardently I admire and love this story! And even though I'm no Mr. Darcy -I'm a girl, so I really cannot be him -but god am I in love with this story! And Miles, especially Miles. I believe I have written this before too, but goodness, I wish I could get my hands on a guy like him in reality. If they exist.
He's fucking awesome. And his accent... Although I really don't know how his accent actually is, considering the fact that I have heard neither an Australian accent nor Irish ever before, but the way you described it kinda made me feel like dirt on the ground you walk on, 'cuz man, can anyone ever be so talented in writing? And here I was, thinking that I was done with writing, but reading this story alone inspires me. Now, my goal is to compete, Lol. Just kiddin'. It'll take me millions of years to write a piece even half good as this one! Over all, I just LOVE the way it's written. A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
Hmm, Seth... Well, what should I say about him? As Asher described him -I really find him cute, by the way -he's like a puppy in a wolf's body. And man am I excited to see the wolf get out! Aw, his blushing alone makes me wanna squeeze him! Aw, now I wish I had a Seth-plushie, or better yet, Miles-plushie, that would be like so friggin' awesome, right?
I'm kinda lost where it came in the last two chapters since I was reading the story instead of sleeping or studying for my Hindi exam tomorrow, but there was a scene where Seth found Asher's ass absolutely delicious, and it made ME want to get inside the computer and eat him up.
Now, let me return to my fav topic, Miles. I'm kind of acting like I got all the energy from Ash, but eh, whatever. Is he an assault victim? I'm sorry if I'm kinda slow or something, but I was too busy admiring the writing style and Miles himself that I didn't do enough justice to paying attention to the plot. Lol. My apologies. So, anyways, is he? An assault victim, I mean? Or does he have AIDS or some disease? I think it's the former, since he's been talking about the dead years, right?
I really like Remy's 'Fuck mine' dialogue. That scene where she practically got Seth nervous, yeah? That was fucking brilliant. And the dialogues exchanged between the Strife brothers, this one:
"Figuratively, I hope."
"Figuratively, of course."
Aw, he's so protective! An' by the end, I kinda started feeling depressed seeing how Miles was feeling that really heart-bugging mixture of emotions. I don't really get what Asher's up to, though, 'cuz, one minute he's all clingy over Seth and the next he's telling Miles that the boy might be good for him... hmm, guess I'll just have to wait for another long chapter, yeah? Lol.
Oh, and I'm so sorry I cannot review each chapter, but that's all due to me being a lazy-ass with an equally lazy connection and a very demanding study routine. Hope I get to read the next chapter soon, though!
-GrayFullbusterfangirl on FictionPress
12/16/2013 c1 28TriploblasticSkies
Love it. I like Seth, and it's really rare that I favor semes over ukes, but I totally go for Miles. He's delicious. And man, his rings... God, where can I find such hot guy here? And such unique personality... okay, maybe not for otakus, but yeah, for the common world out there, definitely unique. Well, Seth is totally lovely. I mean, not that blushing-flushing lovey-dovey lovely, but lovely in the sense that I like reading 'bout him.
Another question though... how long did it take to write this? Lol.
Marvelous job! :D
28TriploblasticSkiesLove it. I like Seth, and it's really rare that I favor semes over ukes, but I totally go for Miles. He's delicious. And man, his rings... God, where can I find such hot guy here? And such unique personality... okay, maybe not for otakus, but yeah, for the common world out there, definitely unique. Well, Seth is totally lovely. I mean, not that blushing-flushing lovey-dovey lovely, but lovely in the sense that I like reading 'bout him.
Another question though... how long did it take to write this? Lol.
Marvelous job! :D
11/24/2013 c1 kAtSki
Interesting premise! I can totally relate to Seth as we have the same views on anime cons and cosplayers/otaku. I do like anime though, just not obsessed with it.
Would love to get to know Miles some more. He seems like a devil-may-care type of person.
Interesting premise! I can totally relate to Seth as we have the same views on anime cons and cosplayers/otaku. I do like anime though, just not obsessed with it.
Would love to get to know Miles some more. He seems like a devil-may-care type of person.