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I love Lucy
I love Lucy
6/1/2014 c1 Guest
why are they all against the poor prince I feel so bad for him. And u know in the ancient times no one really did anything for the girl, not talking anti-feminist. Im just saying the whole blaming things on the poor prince is sad and unreal and the prince doesn't look that strong either.
why are they all against the poor prince I feel so bad for him. And u know in the ancient times no one really did anything for the girl, not talking anti-feminist. Im just saying the whole blaming things on the poor prince is sad and unreal and the prince doesn't look that strong either.
1/18/2014 c31 Hello
Very well-written. I enjoyed the story a lot. Thanks for posting this!
Very well-written. I enjoyed the story a lot. Thanks for posting this!
1/9/2014 c32 Guest
Okay, seriously this story was freaking AMAZING! I read it in like two hours, and I smiled, cried and laughed all together! The storyline, the cast and Will and Tamzin - Everything was so unbelievably good! :D Now I'm off to read the sequel :)
Great Work!
Okay, seriously this story was freaking AMAZING! I read it in like two hours, and I smiled, cried and laughed all together! The storyline, the cast and Will and Tamzin - Everything was so unbelievably good! :D Now I'm off to read the sequel :)
Great Work!
111/3/2014 c32 lvc21
Well, i have nothing to say. What am amazing story, it's been a while since i've read such an exccellent story. Thank you so much for this! It made me happy!
Well, i have nothing to say. What am amazing story, it's been a while since i've read such an exccellent story. Thank you so much for this! It made me happy!
12/27/2013 c29 hirokiri9
I believe you would get more traffic/reviews if you update unbroken as you finish each chapter. I'm sure everyone else has said the same thing, because this story truly is beautiful and so very deserving. Please keep up the hard work!
I believe you would get more traffic/reviews if you update unbroken as you finish each chapter. I'm sure everyone else has said the same thing, because this story truly is beautiful and so very deserving. Please keep up the hard work!
12/25/2013 c1 Bec1246
I just found this story it is so fabulous. I am trying to figure out why there aren't many reviews and I came to a few conclusions
1. Maybe the synopsis should be a little spicier?
2. Because you posted daily, there has not been as much time for a following to gather.
Your writing is amazing and I'm looking forward to the sequel
I just found this story it is so fabulous. I am trying to figure out why there aren't many reviews and I came to a few conclusions
1. Maybe the synopsis should be a little spicier?
2. Because you posted daily, there has not been as much time for a following to gather.
Your writing is amazing and I'm looking forward to the sequel
12/25/2013 c8 hirokiri9
oh the angst! haha...will keeps digging his own grave. but he's such a sweetheart inside. Loving it so much.
oh the angst! haha...will keeps digging his own grave. but he's such a sweetheart inside. Loving it so much.
12/25/2013 c29 Rsass
This story is fantastic I feel like it isn't getting enough traction on this site! Your writing is amazing and the characters are great. Love the world creation. Please post unbroken
This story is fantastic I feel like it isn't getting enough traction on this site! Your writing is amazing and the characters are great. Love the world creation. Please post unbroken
12/25/2013 c5 hirokiri9
this story seriously deserve more reviews/credit. much more interesting that half the stuff people put on this website. keep up the great work!
this story seriously deserve more reviews/credit. much more interesting that half the stuff people put on this website. keep up the great work!
12/23/2013 c31 Sweet Face
Loved ur story! Baby boy? or girl? Can't wait for the sequel .Poor Garrett :(
Loved ur story! Baby boy? or girl? Can't wait for the sequel .Poor Garrett :(