for The Beginning of Fire And Ice3/24/2014 c6 
1Riverfeather123
Wow, I don't know if it was just this chapter or I just never noticed, but your writing is extremely good! Your choice of words and sentence organization is amazing. Well, this was probably one of the best chapters you've written, and that's pretty good. So, I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Job very well done. :)
1Riverfeather123Wow, I don't know if it was just this chapter or I just never noticed, but your writing is extremely good! Your choice of words and sentence organization is amazing. Well, this was probably one of the best chapters you've written, and that's pretty good. So, I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Job very well done. :)
3/18/2014 c5 Riverfeather123
Yay! You finally updated! :D Well, this was another wonderful chapter, and I can't wait to read more, so update again soon! :P
Yay! You finally updated! :D Well, this was another wonderful chapter, and I can't wait to read more, so update again soon! :P
1/26/2014 c4 Riverfeather123
Still a great story! Keep updating! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Still a great story! Keep updating! I can't wait to see what happens next!
12/13/2013 c3 Riverfeather123
:D I can't wait for more! That chapter was AMAZING! Please write some more soon! :D Love it so far!
:D I can't wait for more! That chapter was AMAZING! Please write some more soon! :D Love it so far!
11/27/2013 c2 Riverfeather123
OMG! Where's the rest!? - Good writing! My fav sentence was "Fear gripped my heart". Please please please wright more soon! :)
OMG! Where's the rest!? - Good writing! My fav sentence was "Fear gripped my heart". Please please please wright more soon! :)