for Beyond the Flag11/26/2013 c1 
19Morris Kenyon
Very good, well written and reminiscent of recent Russian claims to the neutral Arctic.
19Morris KenyonVery good, well written and reminiscent of recent Russian claims to the neutral Arctic.
11/22/2013 c1 21Joseph Knox
I'm a huge fan of using repetition for emphasis. The continued use of "Warning: Oxygen Level..." really grounds the story. It gives it a sense of pace and helps escalate the tension by giving the reader the feeling of running short on time. I liked this piece, nice work.
21Joseph KnoxI'm a huge fan of using repetition for emphasis. The continued use of "Warning: Oxygen Level..." really grounds the story. It gives it a sense of pace and helps escalate the tension by giving the reader the feeling of running short on time. I liked this piece, nice work.