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12/25/2014 c1 4M. Tarleton
Beautiful. I love the way you describe the relationship here, the strength inherent in his will to search, to find "your heart underneath the debris," to hold you close despite his own delicacy, his trembling, "the way he shakes clumsily," keeping you near him even though both of you seem uncertain. There is something personal and raw about this poem, something I cannot put my finger on, that I love. Your descriptions are so real and simple, and I assume that's part of the enchantment, why I'm so fond of this piece.

Warm regards,
M.

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