12/3/2013 c1 34inkfngrz
Hey, haven't reviewed you before, (to my knowledge), but I saw this and curiosity got the better of me. :D
This seems like it should be made into a movie series or something... Get the cannibals in the end sort of thing. XD Maybe I watch too much Bones. :)
But other than that, I really liked your writing. It made sense, pretty clear, no fluff to trip up a reader on. :)
Nice work!
Regards, Inkfngrz
Hey, haven't reviewed you before, (to my knowledge), but I saw this and curiosity got the better of me. :D
This seems like it should be made into a movie series or something... Get the cannibals in the end sort of thing. XD Maybe I watch too much Bones. :)
But other than that, I really liked your writing. It made sense, pretty clear, no fluff to trip up a reader on. :)
Nice work!
Regards, Inkfngrz
12/1/2013 c1 4Vampire From Lorien
O.o aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh. I totally love how it started and ended. This was great!
O.o aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh. I totally love how it started and ended. This was great!