for The Amulets12/17/2013 c2 Poo01
Nice story, it'll progress nicely. Yeah. Totally.
Nice story, it'll progress nicely. Yeah. Totally.
12/7/2013 c2 AspiringWriter101
You know, the story is kinda hard to follow, I don't know who's talking and also your characters are pretty over the top, unless this is humor or something, since it's funny.
You know, the story is kinda hard to follow, I don't know who's talking and also your characters are pretty over the top, unless this is humor or something, since it's funny.
12/7/2013 c1 AspiringWriter101
Hey, this is a great start! So yeah, maybe you should get some grammar corrections. It's great you gotta a review Karebear! ;)
Hey, this is a great start! So yeah, maybe you should get some grammar corrections. It's great you gotta a review Karebear! ;)
12/5/2013 c2 
1Rose Specktor
There were some grammar mistakes and confusing/awkward sentences. Interesting story, but a little confusing in my opinion. Good plot, though, and nice lettering in some of the sentences.
1Rose SpecktorThere were some grammar mistakes and confusing/awkward sentences. Interesting story, but a little confusing in my opinion. Good plot, though, and nice lettering in some of the sentences.