for Counting Stars & Sheep1/28/2014 c4 
1Menn
LETS ALL BE HONEST.
I THOUGHT PROBING WITH SOMEONE'S HEE-HAS WAS FUN, BUT PROBING AT THE JAW WAS FREAKIN SEXY HERE.
IMMA JUST JAWS IN MY STORY SOMETIME JUST FOR THIS. JAWSSSS MAN
1MennLETS ALL BE HONEST.
I THOUGHT PROBING WITH SOMEONE'S HEE-HAS WAS FUN, BUT PROBING AT THE JAW WAS FREAKIN SEXY HERE.
IMMA JUST JAWS IN MY STORY SOMETIME JUST FOR THIS. JAWSSSS MAN
1/28/2014 c2 Menn
Dude, this is much more action-packed!
DO I SENSE UNRULY RAPE SCENE- BECAUSE YOUR SYNOPSIS DID NOT SAY "SLASH," SO I DO NOT KNOW!
They should tie him up into a bow. I think he would be a pretty gift. 3 hoohohohoho
Thank you for telling me about this story. It is neat!
Dude, this is much more action-packed!
DO I SENSE UNRULY RAPE SCENE- BECAUSE YOUR SYNOPSIS DID NOT SAY "SLASH," SO I DO NOT KNOW!
They should tie him up into a bow. I think he would be a pretty gift. 3 hoohohohoho
Thank you for telling me about this story. It is neat!
1/3/2014 c4 KissMyAssthma13
WOW.
Like, WOW. I mean, good wow. It's not a bad wow. Seriously.
I'm actually blown away by your writing. And you're only fourteen? I mean, not to say that fourteen-year-olds can't be awesome writers. I'm only two years older myself. But your vocabulary and imagery-I'm, like, Hulking out with envy over here.
Mas, por favor!
And can I just say, I'm falling in love with Stygian already. I just wanna wrap him up in a doughnut and dunk him in my coffee.
. . . Um. Do with that analogy what you will. I'm not really sure what I was trying to get across there either . . .
WOW.
Like, WOW. I mean, good wow. It's not a bad wow. Seriously.
I'm actually blown away by your writing. And you're only fourteen? I mean, not to say that fourteen-year-olds can't be awesome writers. I'm only two years older myself. But your vocabulary and imagery-I'm, like, Hulking out with envy over here.
Mas, por favor!
And can I just say, I'm falling in love with Stygian already. I just wanna wrap him up in a doughnut and dunk him in my coffee.
. . . Um. Do with that analogy what you will. I'm not really sure what I was trying to get across there either . . .