4/18/2014 c2 1Tash B
A couple of months have passed, why havent you updated, you are reaaaaally reaaaaally talented and i think you should continue if this story is important to you, if you honestly just care about the number of reviews you have in order to proceedthen its good you have stopped.

But your writing is ok, its not perfect but its not sloppy either, if you continue writing you can honestly sharpen your skill, i know i may seem like a fan that DESPERATELY wants you to update and in someways i am, but i would much rather see your work and be like, "yeah, i love how she writes shes my inspiration"

It doesnt have to be this story, as long as you are working on something, thats all that matters, just make sure that you finish what you start, trust me, you feel great about yourself and think, "beat that sara shepard, im just as good as you!" Think about it, laterz!

2/24/2014 c2 5visionarydreamer
I like your story! Only 2 chapters in and tension's already building up! Update!

12/7/2013 c1 Guest
Your cover page is cute