for A New Revolution7/9/2014 c16 
9NovemberRose1
AUGH! Good story! I LOVE it! When are you going to write more?! Please come back and finish it! I love the fact that God is involved in the story. :-) maybe you could check out my story on my page, cause it is kind of along the same lines. Great storyline, great plot. If you ever want an editor, would be glad to help you out! :-)
9NovemberRose1AUGH! Good story! I LOVE it! When are you going to write more?! Please come back and finish it! I love the fact that God is involved in the story. :-) maybe you could check out my story on my page, cause it is kind of along the same lines. Great storyline, great plot. If you ever want an editor, would be glad to help you out! :-)
3/8/2014 c16 30Black Trinity
Ah... the classic father teasing. I've seen more than enough scenes where the parents of one side tease the couple. This is better than most, I'll give it that. The emotional scene was quite saddening too.
Looking forward for more.
MOAR!
Please.
30Black TrinityAh... the classic father teasing. I've seen more than enough scenes where the parents of one side tease the couple. This is better than most, I'll give it that. The emotional scene was quite saddening too.
Looking forward for more.
MOAR!
Please.
2/20/2014 c15 Black Trinity
Interesting twist there Ink. I've seen many scenarios where the Pops of the girl requires something of her dream boy, but being atheist?
That's unreasonable... Not being criticizingXD
Interesting twist there Ink. I've seen many scenarios where the Pops of the girl requires something of her dream boy, but being atheist?
That's unreasonable... Not being criticizingXD
2/19/2014 c15 3TriSX
Awesome, I love how you religion in to part of the play. (Christianity is not a religion but a relationship...)
3TriSXAwesome, I love how you religion in to part of the play. (Christianity is not a religion but a relationship...)
2/15/2014 c14 30Black Trinity
I am patient!
I think I now understand what a girl's problems might be. Useful advice. Put to good use.
Keep up tah WORK!
30Black TrinityI am patient!
I think I now understand what a girl's problems might be. Useful advice. Put to good use.
Keep up tah WORK!
2/15/2014 c14 2Terra Booma
Great chapter as always
Somewhatexpectingyoutointroducenewcharactertobecameraman
2Terra BoomaGreat chapter as always
Somewhatexpectingyoutointroducenewcharactertobecameraman
2/8/2014 c13 Terra Booma
XD Well, I don't know about Akeera and Allen, but I have a feeling large exsplosions will be involved pretty much no matter what.
XD Well, I don't know about Akeera and Allen, but I have a feeling large exsplosions will be involved pretty much no matter what.
2/8/2014 c13 1Krast Bannert
I think that their relationship should work out. They've been through hell and back and they're, what? Teenagers?
1Krast BannertI think that their relationship should work out. They've been through hell and back and they're, what? Teenagers?
2/8/2014 c13 30Black Trinity
Go down the rabbit hole. Deep, deep, deep, deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep down.
This is getting interesting.
MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
Please.
30Black TrinityGo down the rabbit hole. Deep, deep, deep, deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep down.
This is getting interesting.
MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
Please.