for Fragile Flames6/4/2014 c6 h earthserpent
:D love it please update again. this is just getting better and better great job.
:D love it please update again. this is just getting better and better great job.
6/4/2014 c6 Guest
Awesome! I cant tell ya how happy i get when my inbox tells me youve updated this story! Cant wait til the next update :D
Awesome! I cant tell ya how happy i get when my inbox tells me youve updated this story! Cant wait til the next update :D
5/28/2014 c5 LazySundayMorning
Woot woot for the new update!
I like how Brooke feels like an enigma to both Ember and to us. Can't wait to find out more about her and Ember.
Woot woot for the new update!
I like how Brooke feels like an enigma to both Ember and to us. Can't wait to find out more about her and Ember.
5/16/2014 c4 LazySundayMorning
Such a jerk! Nah, glad that this awesome work is still currently under process. Defs looking forward to more, even if we do have to wait a little longer.
Such a jerk! Nah, glad that this awesome work is still currently under process. Defs looking forward to more, even if we do have to wait a little longer.
5/14/2014 c4 Yumko Yummy
:D damn finally. is she getting out of that place already? put in a new scene or something.
:D damn finally. is she getting out of that place already? put in a new scene or something.
2/21/2014 c3 h earthserpent
:D update update update. :)
:D update update update. :)
2/4/2014 c3 LazySundayMorning
Is this still happening?
You've got me intrigued and wanting more. Although each chapter is all placed in the same setting the interaction between each character has got me hooked!
Hope you update soon.
Is this still happening?
You've got me intrigued and wanting more. Although each chapter is all placed in the same setting the interaction between each character has got me hooked!
Hope you update soon.
1/17/2014 c3 WhiteSorrow
the moment u told me 'bout re-writing this, i thought i can finally die happy (not until i read the final chap of course. lol)
u're right, this is soo much better than before, if i could be blessed with ur writing skills, i'll be extremely grateful.
pls update soon.
my heart leaps with every update.
the moment u told me 'bout re-writing this, i thought i can finally die happy (not until i read the final chap of course. lol)
u're right, this is soo much better than before, if i could be blessed with ur writing skills, i'll be extremely grateful.
pls update soon.
my heart leaps with every update.
1/16/2014 c3 
16The Crazy Cat Lady
The characters are very intriguing so far. I enjoy the chemistry between Ember and Brooke. I hope you upload the next chapter soon; I want to find out what happens next.
16The Crazy Cat LadyThe characters are very intriguing so far. I enjoy the chemistry between Ember and Brooke. I hope you upload the next chapter soon; I want to find out what happens next.
1/16/2014 c1 The Crazy Cat Lady
Very interesting. The story grabbed my attention. I am curious who the protagonist is which makes me want to read more. You did a good job describing the character's thoughts in first person along describing her injuries. I spotted a minor mistake: "...I amcritically injured." Missed the spacing between "am" and "critically."
Very interesting. The story grabbed my attention. I am curious who the protagonist is which makes me want to read more. You did a good job describing the character's thoughts in first person along describing her injuries. I spotted a minor mistake: "...I amcritically injured." Missed the spacing between "am" and "critically."
12/30/2013 c2 DumbKatt
im being lazy about the logging in again, but meh
anywayss... loven it more an more, and this is deffinatly an upgrade from the first version. Alot less rushed more explanations ! Love it! :D
im being lazy about the logging in again, but meh
anywayss... loven it more an more, and this is deffinatly an upgrade from the first version. Alot less rushed more explanations ! Love it! :D
12/13/2013 c1 h earthserpent
:D love it update! :)
:D love it update! :)
12/11/2013 c1 1JasmineRaven
Wow this is really really really good! So amazing that it is going on my favourites list. I think I might check out Fatal Existence now as I have never read it. :D Well written! Keep up the great writing!
1JasmineRavenWow this is really really really good! So amazing that it is going on my favourites list. I think I might check out Fatal Existence now as I have never read it. :D Well written! Keep up the great writing!