for A Healing Whisper2/7/2014 c21 CarrotLover66
Yaay! Riders taking action! :D And CAIUS! He's BAAAAAACK! I'm glad that they found a way to get to heaven :) and in one chapter too! I admit, the update took a little longer than usual but you have an amazing excuse! I'm sure your new nephew is adorable :) Umm.. well I guess all I have left to say is, YOU ARE AMAZING! Your writing is just spectacular. So yeaa.. Update when you have the chance!
Yaay! Riders taking action! :D And CAIUS! He's BAAAAAACK! I'm glad that they found a way to get to heaven :) and in one chapter too! I admit, the update took a little longer than usual but you have an amazing excuse! I'm sure your new nephew is adorable :) Umm.. well I guess all I have left to say is, YOU ARE AMAZING! Your writing is just spectacular. So yeaa.. Update when you have the chance!
2/7/2014 c21 nayyyy
Ahhhhh finish it!
Ahhhhh finish it!
2/7/2014 c21 green07already
I absolutely loved this chapter! I want Belle to start controlling her powers tho! & maybe Kery can be Belles half sister? LOL :D I cant wait to see in which direction you take this story!
I absolutely loved this chapter! I want Belle to start controlling her powers tho! & maybe Kery can be Belles half sister? LOL :D I cant wait to see in which direction you take this story!
2/7/2014 c21 augmentedDREAMS
LOL. I loved this chapter.
Offf. And there I was thinking that,Byron could be nice. What is that information about Belle that you refuse to tell us? -3- suspense, suspense.
LOL. I loved this chapter.
Offf. And there I was thinking that,Byron could be nice. What is that information about Belle that you refuse to tell us? -3- suspense, suspense.
2/5/2014 c20 QwertyKay
Oh wow! I cant wait to see what happens next! Maybe Belle can finally get the answers she needs...and then get the hell away from Aria!
Oh wow! I cant wait to see what happens next! Maybe Belle can finally get the answers she needs...and then get the hell away from Aria!
2/3/2014 c20 Dontgiveuponmeyet
1. Santanna 3 2. I sing. :P 3. Either, I love both of them to pieces 3. Angel (:
ok now that I did that... I love this story and hurry up and make rider come to his senses and help out aria girl, just god.. And the misguided brother doesnt realize whats good for her.. Oh gawd I just love it!
1. Santanna 3 2. I sing. :P 3. Either, I love both of them to pieces 3. Angel (:
ok now that I did that... I love this story and hurry up and make rider come to his senses and help out aria girl, just god.. And the misguided brother doesnt realize whats good for her.. Oh gawd I just love it!
2/3/2014 c20 Jax
Name: Jax
Trait: Tracker
Do: Pretend to stay calm while secretly freaking out a bit
A/D: Half Demon
Great update, excellent writing even though I obviously selfishly want Rider back (and Caius too), I appreciate that this had to happen at some point and you've written it well!
Name: Jax
Trait: Tracker
Do: Pretend to stay calm while secretly freaking out a bit
A/D: Half Demon
Great update, excellent writing even though I obviously selfishly want Rider back (and Caius too), I appreciate that this had to happen at some point and you've written it well!
2/2/2014 c20 
17Anehalia
Belle, why'd you go? nooo. :'( Poor Rider. And I love it. I seriously love this story.
1)Anehalia
2)extroverted socially awkward smart (sorry, couldn't come up with top one because each one relies on the other traits)
3) blush and hide behind hair while peaking secretly trying to get a good look at the hot guys in front of me without making it too obvious (because lets admit it, hot guys are fun to look at)
4) Angel...
17AnehaliaBelle, why'd you go? nooo. :'( Poor Rider. And I love it. I seriously love this story.
1)Anehalia
2)extroverted socially awkward smart (sorry, couldn't come up with top one because each one relies on the other traits)
3) blush and hide behind hair while peaking secretly trying to get a good look at the hot guys in front of me without making it too obvious (because lets admit it, hot guys are fun to look at)
4) Angel...
2/2/2014 c20 Guest
Aww. My heart goes out to the two of them :(
I can't stand them being apart! D:
And that Aria lady is suspicious. Go with that gut feeling! That intuition of yours Belle!
Aww. My heart goes out to the two of them :(
I can't stand them being apart! D:
And that Aria lady is suspicious. Go with that gut feeling! That intuition of yours Belle!
2/2/2014 c20 3ReaderPossessed
This story really likes to play with my emotions... So I would like to say both "Damn you" and "I FREAKING LOVE YOUUUUUU" cuz this story is amazing! I love the little twists and turns of every chapter, the new things you uncover about the characters, just... Everything! Gaaaahhhhh I'm running out of words to say... My mind is in a "poof" mode where I'm thinking something but when I got to type it my brain is like "No. Stop it. I refuse to Renee things." XD Anyways... Your questions... I'd have to go with:
1. Kerry or Davi (both are girl names lol some people get confused on that)
2. Ummm... Courage, I guess? Daringness? Is that even a word?
3. Stare. Stare a little more. Open my mouth. Shut it. Wave. Say hi. Stare some more. Turn around and sprint into the woods attemptingto convince myself that I was not a complete idiot. Then I'd sit down under a tree and wait to see if one of them followed me. THEN I'd try to have an intelligent (somewhat...) conversation.
4. Ya know, they both have ups and downs. You know what'd be cool though? Half demon, half angel. Two different colored eyes, one for each half, a cold yet fiery personality, the whole shibang! Yep not sure on the spelling for that either. But if not... Probably would opt for neither and be human cuz hell doesn't sound all that appealing and based off what we've seen from the angels... I'd rather not risk
It, you know what I mean?
Keep writing, can't wait to read the next chapter!
3ReaderPossessedThis story really likes to play with my emotions... So I would like to say both "Damn you" and "I FREAKING LOVE YOUUUUUU" cuz this story is amazing! I love the little twists and turns of every chapter, the new things you uncover about the characters, just... Everything! Gaaaahhhhh I'm running out of words to say... My mind is in a "poof" mode where I'm thinking something but when I got to type it my brain is like "No. Stop it. I refuse to Renee things." XD Anyways... Your questions... I'd have to go with:
1. Kerry or Davi (both are girl names lol some people get confused on that)
2. Ummm... Courage, I guess? Daringness? Is that even a word?
3. Stare. Stare a little more. Open my mouth. Shut it. Wave. Say hi. Stare some more. Turn around and sprint into the woods attemptingto convince myself that I was not a complete idiot. Then I'd sit down under a tree and wait to see if one of them followed me. THEN I'd try to have an intelligent (somewhat...) conversation.
4. Ya know, they both have ups and downs. You know what'd be cool though? Half demon, half angel. Two different colored eyes, one for each half, a cold yet fiery personality, the whole shibang! Yep not sure on the spelling for that either. But if not... Probably would opt for neither and be human cuz hell doesn't sound all that appealing and based off what we've seen from the angels... I'd rather not risk
It, you know what I mean?
Keep writing, can't wait to read the next chapter!
2/2/2014 c20 skye real
OMG... The angst in this chapter is absolutely killing! Gawd, I just want her and Rider to be together regardless of him beign a demon, they were still good for each other. Aria is definitely creepy. Maybe she's done something to Bell's brother...
Love the intricacy of the plot! Can't wait for more!
OMG... The angst in this chapter is absolutely killing! Gawd, I just want her and Rider to be together regardless of him beign a demon, they were still good for each other. Aria is definitely creepy. Maybe she's done something to Bell's brother...
Love the intricacy of the plot! Can't wait for more!
2/2/2014 c20 green07already
Well if I was in this story I would love to be named Iona, i'd be fiery and stubborn, & if I were to meet caius id be like take me! hahaha and as far as Rider id love to be the one to hear him out then chew him out for being so damn stupid! lol & A demon of course!
Well if I was in this story I would love to be named Iona, i'd be fiery and stubborn, & if I were to meet caius id be like take me! hahaha and as far as Rider id love to be the one to hear him out then chew him out for being so damn stupid! lol & A demon of course!
2/2/2014 c20 augmentedDREAMS
Lavender eyes? Woohoo! Caius is BACK! xD *happy dance*
Gasp. I was thinking that Byron was going to be the bad guy or something but it feels like Aria is the one behind all the problems. Hmm. . . I don't like her. *pout*
Ohkay. To answer your questions. 1. If I were in this story, I'd love to be named Evangeline. I just love this name. w. 2. Well, I like to think I have a killer sense of humor. ;) 3. First, I'll kiss the crap out of Caius and then slap some sense into Rider for letting Belle leave. xDD 4. Hmm. Angel or Demon? Well, I really don't care but Angel! :3
Lavender eyes? Woohoo! Caius is BACK! xD *happy dance*
Gasp. I was thinking that Byron was going to be the bad guy or something but it feels like Aria is the one behind all the problems. Hmm. . . I don't like her. *pout*
Ohkay. To answer your questions. 1. If I were in this story, I'd love to be named Evangeline. I just love this name. w. 2. Well, I like to think I have a killer sense of humor. ;) 3. First, I'll kiss the crap out of Caius and then slap some sense into Rider for letting Belle leave. xDD 4. Hmm. Angel or Demon? Well, I really don't care but Angel! :3
2/2/2014 c20 CarrotLover66
(Sighs) Im very sad that they are now very seperated.. but they'll find eachother again. Right? Umm that fan thing is pretty coolio :) soo if i were to be in it...
Michaela.
Intelligence?
Freak out and... umm run away?
And angel :)
I think thats it? Ok update soon! Excited to see how you get them back togetherr!
(Sighs) Im very sad that they are now very seperated.. but they'll find eachother again. Right? Umm that fan thing is pretty coolio :) soo if i were to be in it...
Michaela.
Intelligence?
Freak out and... umm run away?
And angel :)
I think thats it? Ok update soon! Excited to see how you get them back togetherr!