for Midnight Roses8/28/2014 c1 
1MangekyoMarie
First original story... Yay! Finally! Very good start, got me hooked. Is she going to be like a Superhero... Hope is more like a Cat Woman who is just after vengeance. Very good detail, I really hope you stick with this.
You will have my reviews through and through. Btw, you were switching between first person and third person writing style when you edit. Other than that... Awesomeness.
1MangekyoMarieFirst original story... Yay! Finally! Very good start, got me hooked. Is she going to be like a Superhero... Hope is more like a Cat Woman who is just after vengeance. Very good detail, I really hope you stick with this.
You will have my reviews through and through. Btw, you were switching between first person and third person writing style when you edit. Other than that... Awesomeness.
1/1/2014 c1 62YFIQ
Here to return the favor for the review to my BEK story, sorry for the delay. A nice POV story of a condemned person and it shows, the moment can be really hard to swallow when things seems to slow down when you want it to be over with.
A good take on the emotion and the feelings.
Guess the rest of the chapters will be flashbacks that would explain everything, I'll be looking forward to it.
If you have time, can you check out "Off the Wall"?
62YFIQHere to return the favor for the review to my BEK story, sorry for the delay. A nice POV story of a condemned person and it shows, the moment can be really hard to swallow when things seems to slow down when you want it to be over with.
A good take on the emotion and the feelings.
Guess the rest of the chapters will be flashbacks that would explain everything, I'll be looking forward to it.
If you have time, can you check out "Off the Wall"?
12/26/2013 c1 25AriaCreates
Hm, this is a great start. Short and sweet. I do want to know who "her" is. You should get on that, just saying.
UPDATE.
25AriaCreatesHm, this is a great start. Short and sweet. I do want to know who "her" is. You should get on that, just saying.
UPDATE.