for Prisoner1/2/2014 c1 
1JasmineRaven
This is great! While I was reading I tried to listen to it in my head as a rap. It sounds great (well..yeah..haha...in my head it does). Definitely keep working on this skill of yours. Your rap/poem could be the next Eminem feat. Rihanna "Monster" (I LOVE THAT SONG). Well, anyway, I think this works great as both a poem and a rap. Well done! Keep up the great work! (I better go, you probably think I'm real weird right now). :)
Jaz
1JasmineRavenThis is great! While I was reading I tried to listen to it in my head as a rap. It sounds great (well..yeah..haha...in my head it does). Definitely keep working on this skill of yours. Your rap/poem could be the next Eminem feat. Rihanna "Monster" (I LOVE THAT SONG). Well, anyway, I think this works great as both a poem and a rap. Well done! Keep up the great work! (I better go, you probably think I'm real weird right now). :)
Jaz