for A Restoration of the Heart12/9/2017 c3 Anon
Oh my lord. I love the way your write. I am superbly grateful that this story is completed right now.
Oh my lord. I love the way your write. I am superbly grateful that this story is completed right now.
10/25/2017 c31 FR3AKSH0WV1CT1M
I think this is my favorite of all your stories so far! I love Elizabeth and Edward but Prudence and George definitely take the cake! The amount of growth that Prudence went through without losing her moral and character was amazing!
I think this is my favorite of all your stories so far! I love Elizabeth and Edward but Prudence and George definitely take the cake! The amount of growth that Prudence went through without losing her moral and character was amazing!
7/6/2017 c29 Dineo
I should say...well written!
I should say...well written!
7/2/2017 c31 Mrs. Awesomesauceness
Just a good, well-rounded story. Thank goodness we have matured as a society in social ways where marriages likes these are super commonplace. But I appreciate that you gave a hopeful, happy ending to this one.
Just a good, well-rounded story. Thank goodness we have matured as a society in social ways where marriages likes these are super commonplace. But I appreciate that you gave a hopeful, happy ending to this one.
4/5/2017 c17 bow ties
Wow. George has to be the most disgusting and spineless piece of shit I've ever had the displeasure of reading. I hope she divorces him and marries a nice guy that deserves her.
Wow. George has to be the most disgusting and spineless piece of shit I've ever had the displeasure of reading. I hope she divorces him and marries a nice guy that deserves her.
4/5/2017 c3 bow ties
I've just started this story and I feel miserable for Prudence already. Wish she could kick her stupid husband and brother in law in the arse and marry an honourable man. :(
I've just started this story and I feel miserable for Prudence already. Wish she could kick her stupid husband and brother in law in the arse and marry an honourable man. :(
2/17/2017 c3 ramla omar
Bitch your book is a work of art. You can publish this.
Bitch your book is a work of art. You can publish this.
7/14/2016 c31 Mees
I loved your story, thank you for posting it!
I loved your story, thank you for posting it!
6/12/2016 c6 Guest
Really enjoyed this chapter!
Really enjoyed this chapter!
6/12/2016 c5 Guest
Awesome chapter... You were able to bring the intricacies in their feelings in such detail!
Awesome chapter... You were able to bring the intricacies in their feelings in such detail!
1/27/2016 c8 Anonymous
Seriously, your characters are so real it almost like I'm reading a published novel! I could really imagine this being adapted into a movie. Hell, I've been reading this with Michael Fassbender in mind as the leading man.
Perhaps you should try to publish your work? And if you already did, I hope it goes well for you and someday I'll see your name and novel in the bestselling list because you really are a good writter.
Seriously, your characters are so real it almost like I'm reading a published novel! I could really imagine this being adapted into a movie. Hell, I've been reading this with Michael Fassbender in mind as the leading man.
Perhaps you should try to publish your work? And if you already did, I hope it goes well for you and someday I'll see your name and novel in the bestselling list because you really are a good writter.
9/26/2015 c11 Teesta
I love Prudence so much! This novel is one of the best I have read on fictionpress. You must seriously think of publishing this as a book someday. It would be a damn good read.
I love Prudence so much! This novel is one of the best I have read on fictionpress. You must seriously think of publishing this as a book someday. It would be a damn good read.
7/31/2015 c7 Annie
This story is seriously so good! I have to comment to thank you for not letting Prudence slide George's rudeness! Seriously, he's been such a jerk and she doesn't need his BS. Gah! She's also suffering here. Anyway good story so far (: excited to see how this will end! Thanks for sharing!
This story is seriously so good! I have to comment to thank you for not letting Prudence slide George's rudeness! Seriously, he's been such a jerk and she doesn't need his BS. Gah! She's also suffering here. Anyway good story so far (: excited to see how this will end! Thanks for sharing!
6/26/2015 c1 engsubpls
i have read this in one sitting and i must say it was a pleasant experience.. Thank you so much for sharing such wonderful story :)
i have read this in one sitting and i must say it was a pleasant experience.. Thank you so much for sharing such wonderful story :)
5/22/2015 c7 Guest
You go girl! Guys are such idiots sometimes they say insults without even realizing it. Think about what you say before saying it. Really? Calling her a sacrifice
You go girl! Guys are such idiots sometimes they say insults without even realizing it. Think about what you say before saying it. Really? Calling her a sacrifice