for Dreaming of The Real You4/3/2014 c1 
2Narwhale
LOL its so sappy and so mushy! Still, I liked it, so you made it work. But there is some deep meaning on certain parts.
"You took something that doesn't belong to you, my heart "
"When I saw you kissing another man"
"Hoping to keep loving a slowly fading memory"
I think I can relate to those lines a lot personally. I guess its because I've been there and done that so many times. Those feels. excellent work, and thank you for sharing this!
2NarwhaleLOL its so sappy and so mushy! Still, I liked it, so you made it work. But there is some deep meaning on certain parts.
"You took something that doesn't belong to you, my heart "
"When I saw you kissing another man"
"Hoping to keep loving a slowly fading memory"
I think I can relate to those lines a lot personally. I guess its because I've been there and done that so many times. Those feels. excellent work, and thank you for sharing this!
1/10/2014 c1 1JasmineRaven
Beautifully written! You used good description and your use of short phrases was very effective. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done :)
Jaz
1JasmineRavenBeautifully written! You used good description and your use of short phrases was very effective. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done :)
Jaz
1/9/2014 c1 SoulsSwords
So sad T_T but very well written! A good alternate title could be "You're Not Here" :)
Great work.
So sad T_T but very well written! A good alternate title could be "You're Not Here" :)
Great work.