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1/13/2014 c1 3Aria.theDreamer
I really like this poem. The structure is good and the flow is gentle, but strong. The syntax is strong as well, filled with interesting words that don't affect your poem's flow.

I especially like the story it conveys because I feel like this is a journey that everyone has found themselves in one way or another. Its message is deep and relatable, it also really made me think of life in a broader sense and made me imagine being in such a journey myself.

In a nutshell, this poem hits all the marks.

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