2/20/2014 c1 19Morris Kenyon
Hope you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism. This started well, but I felt a 100 yard basement was stretching things a little - as well as the kidnapper having 20 women captive. He'd be all day looking after them! And what was the kidnapper going to do with them? Also, I didn't think you got over Amy's fear and disorientation over being kidnapped.
That said, it was well written (I think this would have benefited from being longer) and I hope you carry on writing.