
10/22/2014 c20 Guest
What an awful ending.
What an awful ending.
9/27/2014 c20 darkgurl92
OMG..Why? i really hope there is a sequel..i'm crying over here. really good story though. its hard to find one like this on fictionpress. :)
OMG..Why? i really hope there is a sequel..i'm crying over here. really good story though. its hard to find one like this on fictionpress. :)
9/12/2014 c20 Luna
I should have known you would end the story like this.
I should have known you would end the story like this.
9/12/2014 c20 ReaderWriter2000
Oh...I kinda hope...that's not the end, but...I feel like it is...umm...what about the baby and the character development and awww :(
Oh...I kinda hope...that's not the end, but...I feel like it is...umm...what about the baby and the character development and awww :(
9/12/2014 c20 Celestialuna
Oh come on, you can't be that mean, can you? I'm going to dwell on it forever.
Oh come on, you can't be that mean, can you? I'm going to dwell on it forever.
9/12/2014 c20 edward4life1
NO! Please don't kill Adrianna. I hope that its a dream and she survives. I want to see how her like would be with Angelo. Where was all the guards NO!
NO! Please don't kill Adrianna. I hope that its a dream and she survives. I want to see how her like would be with Angelo. Where was all the guards NO!
9/8/2014 c19 Guest
Just a fyi...she wouldnt have been able to breast feed the next day until evening time or shed be giving the baby that wine she was drinking...but im really enjoying the story
Just a fyi...she wouldnt have been able to breast feed the next day until evening time or shed be giving the baby that wine she was drinking...but im really enjoying the story
9/7/2014 c19 darkgurl92
It's so sad seeing Adrianna like this. i hope she gets the courage and help from someone so that she can escape and try to find a happier life. I think she needs to give Angelo a little taste of his own medicine.
It's so sad seeing Adrianna like this. i hope she gets the courage and help from someone so that she can escape and try to find a happier life. I think she needs to give Angelo a little taste of his own medicine.
9/5/2014 c19 edward4life1
I'm glad that we finally see alittle bit of Angelo's perspective on their relationship. I wonder what Adrianna will do. Will she stay with him or will she leave? I hope we get more of Angelo's thoughts/insights on the relationship. Please post soon.
I'm glad that we finally see alittle bit of Angelo's perspective on their relationship. I wonder what Adrianna will do. Will she stay with him or will she leave? I hope we get more of Angelo's thoughts/insights on the relationship. Please post soon.
8/31/2014 c18 ReaderWriter2000
Yeah...no, chapter 18...the relationship...where can you go with this? I look foward to seeing!
Yeah...no, chapter 18...the relationship...where can you go with this? I look foward to seeing!
8/31/2014 c18 ReaderWriter2000
I really thought the scene where she goes to Angelo and "consoles" him would be a turning point in the relationship...or at least the pregnancy. I just don't know cause he never really talks. And have we had a confirmation about the affair? Just that she found lipstick. Angelo does have a sister, but the way the guards were acting...All suspicious. Look forward to reading more!
I really thought the scene where she goes to Angelo and "consoles" him would be a turning point in the relationship...or at least the pregnancy. I just don't know cause he never really talks. And have we had a confirmation about the affair? Just that she found lipstick. Angelo does have a sister, but the way the guards were acting...All suspicious. Look forward to reading more!